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Reviews For Away in a Manger
Title: I Want A Hippopotamus For Christmas 25 Dec 2009 5:35 pm
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    I've had enough cookies today but I'll take the pic of Severus! Yes we have all gone though this as parents. My kids it was the first gneration talking Elmo. Sadly my twins weren't as luck as Harry. By the next year they had outgrown Elmo (thank God). Thank you for this wonderful Christmas Present!

    Author's Response:

    You're welcome and I went through that one and Power Rangers, that darn Green Ranger and the dragon something flute! Ugh! and then trying to find that Pikachu one, and my sister went crazy looking for Cabbage Patch dolls for her kids and me way back when. Insane!

    Hope you had a great holiday and thanks for reviewing so often. I love it!

    Now here's some more for you!

Title: I Want A Hippopotamus For Christmas 25 Dec 2009 4:32 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah, Weasleys on the scene. I liked this. Mila

    Author's Response: Thanks so much and here's some more for you!
Title: I Want A Hippopotamus For Christmas 25 Dec 2009 10:50 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    What a great chapter for christmas morning. I remember cabbage patch dolls, took forever to get, but I passed them down to my kids. Can't wait to read next chapter. Love this story. Really want the dursleys to get in trouble, but want Harry to stay with Sev and Augustus. Happy Holidays!

    Author's Response:

    Yeah maybe they will once all is revealed. I hope so!

    I have a Cabbage Patch doll that I have in storage. maybe one of my nieces will get it someday . . .if they behave.

    Hope you like the next chapter!

Title: Frosty the Snow . . .Dog? 24 Dec 2009 5:44 pm
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    lol I was just about to ask you if it really works but you've already answered it. Too bad I can't use it since the kid my great-aunt takes care of doesn't speak English :(

    Harry is so bad lol and cute! Poor Severus :P

    And Grandpa is wondering, I wonder for how long though...MERRY XMAS!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks and the same to you! :)

    Just wait till you see what happens in the next chapter! It's up now and will soon be followed by another!

Title: Frosty the Snow . . .Dog? 23 Dec 2009 11:43 pm
Reviewer: teddybear (Signed) [Report This]
    WOW!! I liked the part about Harry have the tantrum and what he did. That was great. I'm going to have to remember that for when I watch my friend's kids.

    Author's Response: Thanks and it really does work1 Hope you like the next chapter!
Title: Frosty the Snow . . .Dog? 23 Dec 2009 7:39 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved this whole chapter. The tantrum was handled well, I've been through many a store with a whiny toddler and know just how it feels.

    The snowman theme really got to me since I love them and would love it if one came to life! Too bad I don't have magic!

    Author's Response: Me too! I'd love to! Thanks for reading.
Title: Frosty the Snow . . .Dog? 23 Dec 2009 7:31 am
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    Brilliant1 Loved the snowdog and the way Harry made it come to life and also how Severus dealt with his cranky son. This story is so good!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Title: Frosty the Snow . . .Dog? 23 Dec 2009 7:24 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    So cute! What a wonderful story! Harry really is a strong wizard! And Severus handled that tantrum perfectly. I've done the same. :)

    Author's Response: Thank you, glad to know that.
Title: Frosty the Snow . . .Dog? 22 Dec 2009 5:05 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely chapter I really felt for Severus with the tantrum we have all been there with 2 year terrors!

    Author's Response: Oh yes, we sure have and here's another one for you to enjoy!
Title: Frosty the Snow . . .Dog? 22 Dec 2009 2:55 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Ahhhhh the joys of taking toddlers to the toy store! Every parent has gone through that trial and I feel for them every time. Severus handled Harry perfectly. Spanking a child who is having a tantrum rarely works, but using embarrassing comments almost always does. This way Harry got to decide for himself that his behavior was inappropriate and the lesson is much more likely to stick with him. Hopefully, he will never behave like that again. (Wishful thinking, of course xD)

    Well, Harry certainly chose a wonderful and exciting way to announce his magical abilities, didn't he? I really liked how Severus handled the 'loss' of Snowflake. This way Harry won't be too sad about the demise of the snow dog.

    I wonder if Severus will ever come clean about Harry's true parentage? I really believe that Augustus will understand and accept Harry no matter what.

    Great chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Yes, Harry has a streak of naughtiness coming up in chapter ten.

    He did, but then he's Harry.  Yes, Harry won't be too sad.

    You could be right, but Severus is very cautious and eventually he might tell him, or Augustus might just figure it out himself.

    Thanks so much!


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