| Title: Holly and Ivy
| 05 Feb 2010 11:41 pm
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| Reviewer: bianca (Anonymous)
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I'm glad that Harry thinks for himself and doesn't take Sirius Black's word for anything.
It always seemed rather odd to me in canon, after hearing Black was an escaped convict, Harry took his side immediately and happily agreed to go live with him.
Glad you're having Harry wise up.
| Title: God Rest Ye Merry Gentleman
| 05 Feb 2010 11:19 pm
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| Reviewer: Lumiere (Signed)
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Ohmgoodness that was brilliant!!! I couldn't help but cry, it was beautiful!
Oh how sad :( Wonderful chapter Excellent writing!
| Title: God Rest Ye Merry Gentleman
| 05 Feb 2010 10:50 pm
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| Reviewer: Judy (Signed)
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Great chapter! I cried again when I read the poem and really felt for Harry and Severus. I remember when my grandpa died and I cried for weeks after it. Sirius is acting like an idiot now I hope he improves later. Sev did a good job of keeping his temper and so did Harry. Update soon!
That poem was just amazing!
| Title: Breath of Heaven
| 05 Feb 2010 10:40 pm
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| Reviewer: Judy (Signed)
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I cried at the end of this it was so moving! In fact, I'm still crying now. I understand why Augustus did what he did but OMG it got me right here. Beautifully done. I wish this were a movie.
| Title: Holly and Ivy
| 05 Feb 2010 10:16 pm
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| Reviewer: Judy (Signed)
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Can I just say this chapter was so funny I almost died laughing!
"But Papa, how would he know? He's old and Grandma's dead."
That has to be the funniest thing I've read in years!
And I loved the romance between Sandra and Severus too. It's about time!
Harry looked horrified. “Papa, how would he know? He’s old and Grandma’s dead.”
BEST LINE EVER!!!!
Wonderful chapter! Siruis is such an ass, doing this to Harry at his grandfather's memorial service. This could and should have been done at a later time, less tension. Thank you for the great chapter. I see Dumbledore gone from Hogwarts and Minerva as headmistress.
just so you know, you caused a river of tears with this one. Masterfully done, but must you rip out my heart with such enthusiasm?
V.
Aww...I kinda forgive you for killing Augustus off...lol, that was a very well written chapter, the dream was a wonderful way for Harry to begin to accept what happened to his grandpa and the poem was perfect. I was suprised to see Sirius turn up, im glad that Harry defended his Papa like a true Snape/Prince. Looking forward to more :)
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