I thought I’d get started on some early Christmas magic.
So good to read this again.
I bawled and calmed down and bawled and bawled again. Pretty much the whole chapter, me:😭😭😭😭😭. Many many tears. I am definitely coming back for a reread and tears, this was perfect. 100/10
I knew this was coming. You hinted in your notes...
I am still bawling like a freakin' baby.
I knew he wasn't going to live through this fic, I KNEW. Old people never do, NEVER.
I'm going to miss him.
I am in love with Augustus Prince (in my head he's always been Severus Prince), he's exactly as i always imagined Snape's grandad to be. I also am very, VERY happy about his idea of justice. I'm sick of revenge nonsense, it's bullshit and makes you no better than the people that hurt you, but justice. I go for justice, because it's less personal and more structured, like law, because without law there is no order and without order there is no safety.
Your nephew must have been a damn smart kid, talking when Harry did. Every kids different, so I guess you do what you want. Fanfics are cool like that. 😏
Babies don't start to make coherent words and sentences until around 24 months, depending on how much interaction they get. My family is huge, so our babies start on the younger (20ish months) side, but babies with smaller families would take longer. Also, neglected babies would be less. They typically can run before they can really understandably talk and usually it takes a translated (mom or dad) to understand them. Babies Harry's age could do words; mom, dad, no, that type of thing. You got the Baba right on the money though...and Snape getting peed on 🤣🤣🤣🤣 Baby boys, am I right.
| Title: Deck the Halls
| 14 Apr 2021 11:15 am
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| Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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I'm happy snape is getting rid of the scar btw it's brilliant! That's literally the only way people know to recognize harry potter. He should do some legal stuff though at least in the muggle world, else old manipulative dumbledore will happily come in and screw stuff up to fit his plans
| Title: They Came Upon A Midnight Clear
| 14 Apr 2021 10:31 am
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| Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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Oh I just hope there's no problems from the deception about harry's parents. This augustus guy could easily write snape off for it
You're AWESOME! Harry is so cute! When's Severus going to tell Augustus who his son really is?
| Title: Blue Christmas
| 16 Nov 2015 5:14 am
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| Reviewer: marty (Anonymous)
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You right so many stories using other people characters and your so good I think you should just publish your story for real it would be amazing.that way rowling isnt getting credit for your ideas
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