Oh, I REALLY like this! Especially since there was no telling for certain who was the baby and who was the adult till the end. Bravo!
Great chapter thank you Severus very much IC!
Very delightful--all of these are. Nice work!
-P.G.
Great! I love that you make it sound like it's Harry until the very end!
-P.G.
Oh, interesting. He saved Snape. I like the way you've written this story--little stories. Nicely done. I'm looking forward to more.
Aw, that is so so sweet.
It's hard to imagine Snape so tender, but you write it perfectly. Great job.
Aw, poor Snape. I'm glad that Harry at least is visiting him.
Nice beginning.
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| 10 Dec 2009 11:44 am
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| Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous)
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I really loved that. It was a surprise at the end that gave me a little shiver. And then I went back and read it again and pictured the 'dad' as Harry and the things he was saying made more sense and yet they could have fit both men. What a beautiful way to show how very much alike they are. Perfect.
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