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Reviews For Blood Magic
I wonder if McGonagall suspects though. I think she might. Great chappie, and I'm really anxious to see the conversation that is surely to come about between Remus and Snape over this revelation. Author's Response: Yes, things get better between Harry and Remus after that. McGonagall is confused, but I think she's optimistically hoping that they learned to work together for the sake of the Order and the greater good. ;-)
I don't usually go for Hermione and Harry together, but you just make it seem like a natural progression of their relationship. I can see the attraction in this story, where normally I feel that they are too much like brother and sister. Well done. Author's Response: Thanks!
I really love how you portray Harry. You've kept him really in character, and showing a certain maturity, while not changing his penchant for risk-taking and rule-breaking. I love the twins--they're hilarious. OOh, Harry sounds like he's really starting to resemble Snape, and I think that Hermione, as intelligent as she is, is starting to suspect something; even if she's not quite sure what is going on. Ooh, I know what's going to happen in the next chapter, and I'm looking forward to reading it again! I'm excited. :)
Ooh, I love this twisted plot, with Remus misinterpreting Harry and Severus' relationship, and Severus' feelings of mistrust towards Remus. Love it! Ooh, on to the next chappie. I know that I sound like a broken record (or, I suppose CD these days.) but I'm pleased as punch that you've posted here!! Author's Response: That was about as directly as Harry could bear to approach it! :-)
Oh, and Snape saying to Harry that it was not a very fatherly response, was too cute. So, he's subtlety admitting to Harry that he is starting to feel fatherly towards him. Snape is obsessed with Harry's wardrobe, isn't he? LOL! Author's Response: I somehow can't imagine either of them being easily embarrassed by that. ;-)
I can understand Remus' frustration with Snape. For those, who the price is too high, it must be a miserable existence indeed. But at least Remus can get it for free. The others...well that is too sad. OOh, Remus was really out of line putting Severus and Harry on the spot like that about Harry's robes. If he had any questions about it, or concerns, he should have confronted Severus in private. I'm so glad that you've posted here, and that I get the opportunity to read this wonderful story again. :) Author's Response: I'm having fun going through it again too! (Is that allowed?) I wanted to show why Remus was returning so on edge. And yes, the public mention of the robes was out of line. He doesn't know what he's poking....
Thanks for the comments!
Oh oh! Remus is starting to get the wrong idea! Great chappie as usual.
I do hope that George and Fred will be able to get Ron to remove his head from his rear and try to understand that having a relationship with Severus is important not only TO Harry but FOR Harry. Ron forgets, I think, that Harry doesn't know what it's like to have a parent who actually CARES what he is doing and where he is going. Ron is being a selfish prat about all this. Author's Response: :-) It's not like the twins didn't change their own style, even! More Ron in a few minutes....
I can't wait until we have Snape's reaction to Harry's tight leather pants. Draco's change from antagonstic to being on friendly terms with Harry was very realistic. Don't often see that in fanfiction. Author's Response: Thank you! I'm terribly flattered. While I was writing this I usually posted every week or two. It took a year and a half, but I wanted all the changes gradual enough to be believable. |
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