I like this. This is how it should have been in the book.
I don’t think I’ve ever seen this done before - and I’ve read A LOT of Snape/Harry fanfiction! I loved the originality, and how OF COURSE Harry disobeys and stays, and how Snape is not nearly so cutting upon this discovery and it’s like, you know he understands Harry needs this; needs to help and be there. You truly see the cracks in both of them… the two lost boys trying SO HARD to save their de facto father and yet still failing. I think there could have been no more fitting ending. I would love to see a follow up to this. Harry and Snape now having no one but each other and Snape takes on a new fatherly/mentor role for Harry - what Dumbledore once was for him. Great job!
| Title: Chapter 1
| 09 Oct 2018 1:28 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Oh wow this was so good I'd have loved for it to continue. Thank you so much
Yes, there’s interest!
Tear-jerker as a standalone, though. Awesome job!
Oh please continue this story!
Interested completely!!!!
this would make an excellant story and i would be hooked!
| Title: Chapter 1
| 13 Jul 2010 10:26 pm
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| Reviewer: DC (Anonymous)
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