Could've gone better indeed!
Nicely done - really like this. I shall start reading on Resorted tomorrow.
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Author's Response: Thanks. :D
I always saw Severus and Minerva as having more of a positive relationship than a negative one. Oh, they bicker, alright, but that doesn't mean they don't get along. Thank you for portraying that. Well done!
Author's Response: Thanks. :D
Oooh - nice job of getting into Severus' head! I love it! Brilliantly done. Bravo! ^^
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This was good. =)
Author's Response: Thank you for your lovely review. I'm glad you liked it.
| Title: Telling Harry
| 17 Mar 2010 3:14 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you I loved Severus' thoughtd but I think you are wise to stop and start again if that made sense
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. It made perfect sense. I'll try to keep some of Snape's thoughts in it, but I'm finding it to be much easier to use dialogue.
very nice
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Interesting take on the 'resorting' thing! I like!
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you like it.
I don't blame Harry for being angry; they certainly didn't ask him what he wanted, nor did they think of how his schoolmates and friends might react. This will cause Harry many problems and will place him in a House where he has no friends and several enemies. Not good at all.
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Most definitely it will cause problems. My only issue that I'm having right now in writing this is trying to stay in Snape's pov since it's more of a Harry issue now than Snape.
| Title: All a Matter of Perception
| 13 Mar 2010 1:56 am
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| Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous)
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Really like the interaction between sev and minerva, my favorite line...Welcome Home Harry... Great chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I think that's my favorite line so far also. I should have more posted sometime today (3/13).
She gave Harry to Severus because she was afraid of his talent and that was wrong. Harry is most likely going to feel rejected by the House of Gryffindor and he won't be wrong. I hope that Severus will be able to convince Harry that there is nothing wrong with his ability and that having it doesn't mean that he is evil.
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm currently thinking of revisiting that decision of Minerva's in a later chapter. She seems to have given in a little too easy for my liking. I should update today (3/13) sometime.
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