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Title: Something in the Wind 10 May 2010 5:30 pm
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Signed) [Report This]
    very moving

    Author's Response: Thanks
Title: Something in the Wind 10 May 2010 5:20 pm
Reviewer: tambrathegreat (Signed) [Report This]
    Yum English breakfast muffins. Love those..

    Poor Hermione and Mrs. Granger. I do feel very bad for them. I know in cannon, Hermione did not remain too close with her parents, but in this story it seems like she was.

    This chapter was paced well and thoughtful. I love how Draco is the one to suggest they do the essay, and how it is exactly how they are to be punished.

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Yes, egg and bacon muffins were a favorite breakfast when I was young: we used to have them on saturday mornings.

    A parent's death is almost always a tragedy for those left behind and both Hermione and Mrs Granger are going to be miserable for a long time, it wouldn't be realistic to portray it otherwise. However, Uroborus is a healing house. (I always thought that, in the canon, it was a minor miracle that neither Mr or Mrs Granger was targeted in the children's fifth year as they are so vulnerable and so obvious a target.)
Title: Something in the Wind 10 May 2010 5:11 pm
Reviewer: Stefunny2010 (Signed) [Report This]
    I guess I spoke too soon in my last review, everything apparently did not turn out ok. Poor Hermione, that is a horrible thing to happen to her so young. However, I get the point of the plot and it needing to happen and I think you did a great job on the whole chapter. Great job!

    Author's Response: I know, when I saw your last review, I felt a real heel for what I was planning. However, it was necessary for the plot. Thanks for the review.
Title: Healing 10 May 2010 4:29 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Love the Naughty Little Sister books and so did my children! Great chapter thank you

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Yes, so do I; Dorothy Edwards is a wonderful writer and her stories, although written for children, are sweet and amusing enough to entertain the adults who read them aloud to their kids :)
Title: Rude Awakenings 10 May 2010 12:46 pm
Reviewer: Stefunny2010 (Signed) [Report This]
    Im glad that everything seems to be ok with everyone, though I have a feeling that Severus will talk to Harry at some point about what had occured. Anyways, Im glad that they had a good year, with everything working out in the end. great job!
Title: Rude Awakenings 10 May 2010 11:57 am
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    *snickers softly* They are not going to get away scott free are they? Oh dear, I do believe they are in trouble, as Filch said in book one. Hmm, perhaps I shall go to OoTPegasus when you've finished this :P.
Title: Rude Awakenings 10 May 2010 1:22 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love Lucius in this, "waving around the sword of Gryffindor, summon the sorting hat"! I love harry being held by snape. Can't wait to read more!

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review: yes, I rather enjoyed writing Lucius' little speech: I think that Draco is enough to turn any parent's hair grey- one of his his ambitions is to appear as impressive as possible and, naturally, that leads to a certain amount of stress for those who would prefer that he remain in the land of the upright and breathing lol.
Title: Rude Awakenings 10 May 2010 12:59 am
Reviewer: love_it (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely end to that entire adventure! Dumbledore's quip towards Lucius was spot on, and rather funny!
    Draco's reasoning for having Gryffindor's sword was amusing as well.

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^ I just had to squeeze that quip in; hot-tempered, influential Lucius tends to win most of his battles with Albus, so I wanted to give the headmaster a chance to win a verbal duel lol!
Title: Rude Awakenings 09 May 2010 10:04 pm
Reviewer: tambrathegreat (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay woad-painted Picts. I would love to see a picture of Draco in full woad and brandishing he sword. Great image that.

    Lucius' presence, brought my Hermione, was great. I'm sure his heart was in his mouth the entire time he blasted through the obstacles. Another picture I would love to see.

    Great chapter. I really enjoyed it.

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^ I think, though, Draco would prefer the glittery armour of a medieval knight rather than woad (unless, of course, he could wear lots of heavy celtic jewellery and be riding a chariot lead by two frothing unicorns lol ;) I had the feeling that quite a few people would enjoy picturing the scene of Lucius blasting his way through the third floor corridor; although Lucius is very refined, when Draco's concerned, he doesn't mind making a scene if it will keep his son safe, i.e. in the end of DH, Lucius and Narcissa run through the school sreaming for Draco. (Another image I have is of Professor Sprout walking back to the greenhouse with the charred remains of her Devil's Snare in a plant pot- and sending the passing Lucius a filthy look ^^.)
Title: Rude Awakenings 09 May 2010 8:43 pm
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I absolutely adore the fact that Draco chose Gryffindor's sword as a weapon. Poor child was shocked beyond words. It just goes to show how much in common the two Houses have and the deep connection between them. I wonder if they will discover that Draco is a descendant of the Gryffindor family and that is why he could use the sword? I have to say that Lucius also showed some rather Gryffindorian tendencies; blasting curses indeed! :D

    It's good that Quirrell survived and was able to bring Harry out of the gauntlet. I hope that his recovery will be a full one and that he will choose to return to Hogwarts. The idea that Dumbledore had for the combined course is a good one (and will get Binns to retire, already) and it was good of him to involve the children.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the review. Yes, I just had to give Draco Gryffindor's sword; you can just imagine his pleasure at seeing the huge, silver, bejewelled blade which practically sang 'Wield me, Prince Draco: I am the biggest, flashiest, most badass weapon anyone has ever seen. You'll look so cool with me in your hands..." Hook, line and sinker ;)

     Gryffindor and Slytherin are very similar; ambition and bravery, after all, go hand in hand as the more ambitious one is, the more likely it is that one will fail. Gryffs and Slyths are also very practical people, they prefer to do rather than just theorise. However, all Houses have students who are brave (Gryffindor), cunning and ambitious (Slytherin), hardworking and noble (Hufflepuff) and clever, (Ravenclaw), for example, in their business, Fred and George show ambition, intelligence and a great capacity for hardwork, in their pranks, they often reveal great cunning and they are inheriently noble. The Houses only differ in the way in which these traits manifest; a Slytherin may be incredibly brave but, unlike your stereotypical Gryff, they will plan using every ounce of their cunning, i.e. before his daring coup, Voldemort raised an army and killed off anyone who could pose a threat. And, yes, Lucius is quite Gryffindorish at times (especially in his roaring and stamping when he doesn't get his own way!) however, his choice of blasting curses was pure Slytherin; Obstacles + Child on other side + Imminent danger + Who cares who I wake up + Bad temper = blow everything up!


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