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Title: Six of Seven 07 May 2010 7:44 pm
Reviewer: Stefunny2010 (Signed) [Report This]
    Im glad that Harry was able to do his thing in the end, I dont know how it would have worked otherwise. Though I am glad that the others all made it through all of the tasks, it sure made things seem a lost faster. You did a great job with this chapter and I cant wait to see how everyone reacts to what happens next!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the review ^^ Yes; as Slytherins are more cautious, they tend to plan rather than react, which tends to speed up the whole process, moreover, the five-strong team has two brilliant seekers, three chess buffs and three people skilled at logic problems, which meant that the tasks were considerably easier. Of course, on the other hand, as Slytherins don't have the 'everything will turn out okay' mentality of many Gryffindors, meaning that some parts of the chapter are rather slower paced. Swings and roundabouts lol! 

Title: Six of Seven 07 May 2010 7:04 pm
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Signed) [Report This]
    another great chapter

    Author's Response:

    Thanks ^^

Title: Alone 07 May 2010 3:34 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    At least the children did TRY to tell an adult that they trusted. What terrible timing! I do hope that they will be alright....and that they will survive to face the punishment that will surely follow this idiocy.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the review. Yes, Harry's fatal mistakes were a. not sending an owl to his father/Dumbledore and b. not contacting Lucius immediately. I think that, whatever happens, the children are going to suffer the consequences of dashing off into danger rather more acutely than they do in the canon. Just how long is Harry's punishment essay going to be?

Title: Alone 07 May 2010 12:36 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great Chapter. Your writing makes it so easy to visualize what is happening. I love the part where Blaise reminds Harry of Sev. Can't wait to see what happens when Sev finds out where they are going. Please post soon!

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^ I think Blaise and Severus have a lot in common; they are both capable of masking thier feelings, have loving hearts and a way with words. Severus is genuinely busy at the moment; he was not called away on a false premise and he has a lot to accomplish before the dawn. (No one seems to have speculated who has died, which is interesting) 
Title: Alone 06 May 2010 8:28 pm
Reviewer: love_it (Signed) [Report This]
    They really are silly spies... Then again, they are eleven, and eleven year olds are particularly thick, so it's excusable ;)
    I'm definitely enjoying this fic. Each chapter gets better and better! Thanks for updating!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the review: I'm glad you're enjoying the fic ^^ . Yes, Harry, in particular, rather lacks cool calculation although he does consider his options more carefully than he does in the canon, so Severus and Slytherin have had some effect! (With Hermione, the effect is more pronounced; she was always the most cautious and calculating of the trio but, in Gryffindor, these traits were undervalued, whereas, in Slytherin, the ability to plan is considered an asset and, therefore, nurtured.) Eleven year olds often feel invincible, so they don't usually judge the degree of danger accurately.

Title: Alone 06 May 2010 4:24 pm
Reviewer: B00kw0rm92 (Signed) [Report This]
    WONDERFUL chapter! And I like how they really tried to get adults to help too. Can't wait to see what happens next!

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^ I thought it'd be more in character for Slytherins, whose House values planning and cool calculation, to at least consider their options before charging ahead.
Title: Alone 06 May 2010 1:41 pm
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    Arggh to cliffies! Great chapter btw :P Kudos.

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Yes, I know, I do love cliffhangers but at least you won't have to wait forever for the next chapter ^^
Title: Amnesty -vs- Avenging 06 May 2010 12:33 pm
Reviewer: tambrathegreat (Signed) [Report This]
    I am so sorry for not reviewing every chapter, but this story has been so good, that I forget to in order to get to the next chapter.

    I love how you are bringing cannon events into the story while still making the plot your own. Really great job on characterization and plotting. I'm in awe.

    T

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm really glad thay you're enjoying it ^^
Title: Alone 06 May 2010 10:02 am
Reviewer: Stefunny2010 (Signed) [Report This]
    I absolutley loved how they reacted when they found out what Harry was up to. I think that going to Dracos' dad was a really good idea too! Too bad neither he or Dracos' mother were in. I cant wait to see how the stone saving goes in the coming chapters, great job!!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks ^^ Well, Lucius was an obvious choice, even more than the children could have possibly realised considering Lucius' position: not only would he know who had definately turned their backs on Voldemort, he would be able to summon half-a-dozen warlocks to accompany him.

    I'm glad you liked the kids reactions; away from the Gryff influence, Hermione has become rather more cautious and calculating and even Harry trys to think through his options. Draco's fury, Blaise's cutting sarcasm and Theo's tired resignation I thought were all in character ^^.

Title: Eye of the Storm 05 May 2010 3:12 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I hope that Harry won't be discovered by Quirrel and his companion (who, of course, is Voldie). It's just his luck that the Room would malfunction and put him in harms way. Interesting that Quirrel is able to speak Parseltongue, but I suppose it is because of how very 'close' he and his companion are. :D

    I'm glad that the examinations went well and are finally over. Now it's time for the children to have a little fun. I wonder how long it will take for the other children to begin to wonder where Harry is and start to inquire as to his whereabouts?

    Great chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the review. I don't think that the room actually malfunctioned; my idea of Hogwarts is that the castle has a degree of sentience- how else would the shifting staircases have not resulted in any deaths! In DH, the Room of Requirement is able to place its exit anywhere in the castle and, as it never places the children directly in harms way, one wonders whether it 'senses' people with evil intent. If so, the RoR might have decided that Harry needed to know about Voldemort's plans and taken the opportunity to eject him in a place where a. he could hide and b. he could overhear their plans. Quirrell is able to speak parseltongue because, as you suggested, he and Voldemort are sharing a head.


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