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Reviews For When the Boat Comes In
Author's Response: Thanks ^^ In the canon, although Harry often behaves much older than his years, he is also quite irresponsible; the events at the end of Order of the Phoenix are one example of a situation where a little consideration might have prevented a tragedy. Toby is going to teach Harry to be patient and the importance of considering all the posibilities of his actions, whether leaving a basket of chocolate on his bed or dashing into danger.
Author's Response: Thanks, I am feeling rather better. I thought that 'welcome to teaching' was rather a 'Severus Snape' comment. Toby, like most dogs, is going to put a bit of strain on the family and, now that Harry is rid of the soul-shard, he is going to be a little more bolshy.
Author's Response: Thanks: the Weasleys, with, perhaps, the exception of Arthur, Fred and George, seem to be a fiery lot but, with certain members, for example Ron and Percy, the temper is a real drawback as they are also resentful and slow to forgive. However, Ron is not completely implacable and, as he realises that he was wrong, the breach can be healed.
Author's Response: Thanks ^^. Ron and Harry will become good friends, as I expect is clear from this chapter, but Harry's time in Slytherin has changed him; he's more empathetic, more cautious (Slytherin's are a sensitive lot) and, naturally, more studious. Therefore, while he likes Ron, Harry will now see the more boorish side of Ron's nature, whereas, before, he might have ignored/made excuses for it.
Author's Response: Thanks ^^. I'm glad you like the owlets :)
Author's Response: Thanks ^^
I'm glad that the children love their new owlets and am sure that they will all treat them well (even Ron). Maybe this will be a way for Ron to get to know Harry and the other Slytherins better. It would do him a great deal of good to learn that Slytherins aren't evil. Great chapter! Author's Response: Thanks ^^. I agree, Gryffindor and Slytherin are very similar in many respecs. However, I think that, as far as the first years are concerned, Neville and Ron really are the best suited to Harry's gang; the other girls in Gryffindor have never struck me as particularly pleasant, Seamus has a long running feud with Harry and, as Dean is Seamus's best friend, I expect he'll not be too keen on burying the hatchet either. Fred and George are already friendly, so Percy, Lee, Angelina and Katie are possibilites. Oliver Wood is too obsessed with quidditch to wish to hang around Slytherins, I expect ^^.
Author's Response: Thanks ^^. Ron, as you say, is unpredictable but, with Molly on the look-out, he's not going to be too unreasonable lol! I'm glad you liked the owlets ^^
Author's Response: Thanks ^^ this chapter was really hard to write and I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Harry's capable of great compassion and, as Severus' story is one which invites sympathy, Harry will not think badly of his father. Lucius is going to see to it that Trelawney doesn't even remember who was listening at the door on that fateful night so Harry won't find out about Severus' spying. If he did, however, I think Harry would still understand although, of course, it would be hard on him. This is why Severus is not going to tell him; no good would be achieved by it. |
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