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Title: Spring Shenanigans 30 Apr 2010 10:30 pm
Reviewer: Stefunny2010 (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved the chapter:) I though Toby was a perfectly characterized puppy. Harrys' frustrations were also well placed in this chapter, I thought. Dogs are hard work, especially in the beginning. I cant wait to see what else you come out with, great job!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks ^^ In the canon, although Harry often behaves much older than his years, he is also quite irresponsible; the events at the end of Order of the Phoenix are one example of a situation where a little consideration might have prevented a tragedy. Toby is going to teach Harry to be patient and the importance of considering all the posibilities of his actions, whether leaving a basket of chocolate on his bed or dashing into danger.

Title: Spring Shenanigans 30 Apr 2010 10:26 pm
Reviewer: AchillesMonkey (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm sorry you've been sick. I hope you're feeling better. I loved Severus's comment about "Welcome to teaching." Very amusing. Thanks for the update!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks, I am feeling rather better. I thought that 'welcome to teaching' was rather a 'Severus Snape' comment. Toby, like most dogs, is going to put a bit of strain on the family and, now that Harry is rid of the soul-shard, he is going to be a little more bolshy.  

Title: Owlets 26 Apr 2010 12:48 pm
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    Finally. Why do red-heads have such tempers at times? Then again, that could be said about any color hair. But it seemed to me that Rowling fashioned the Weasley families to really have a temper. Kudos on a job well done.

    Author's Response: Thanks: the Weasleys, with, perhaps, the exception of Arthur, Fred and George, seem to be a fiery lot but, with certain members, for example Ron and Percy, the temper is a real drawback as they are also resentful and slow to forgive. However, Ron is not completely implacable and, as he realises that he was wrong, the breach can be healed.   
Title: Owlets 26 Apr 2010 1:36 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Im glad Ron is beginning to see the real harry, I missed them together! Great chspter

    Author's Response:

    Thanks ^^. Ron and Harry will become good friends, as I expect is clear from this chapter, but Harry's time in Slytherin has changed him; he's more empathetic, more cautious (Slytherin's are a sensitive lot) and, naturally, more studious. Therefore, while he likes Ron, Harry will now see the more boorish side of Ron's nature, whereas, before, he might have ignored/made excuses for it.

Title: Owlets 25 Apr 2010 10:23 pm
Reviewer: B00kw0rm92 (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful as usual! I'm glad that Harry and Ron seem to be starting to get along. And the baby owls sound soooo cute!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^. I'm glad you like the owlets :)
Title: Owlets 25 Apr 2010 10:18 pm
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Signed) [Report This]
    great chapter

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^
Title: Owlets 25 Apr 2010 9:11 pm
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I have a feeling that the twins might get the location out of Harry eventually if he isn't really careful. Not, mind you, that I worry too much about what they might do with the information. It might be a good idea for Harry and his friends to become friends with more Gryffindors. The two houses are very similar in many ways and I'm sure that with a little time they could get on famously.

    I'm glad that the children love their new owlets and am sure that they will all treat them well (even Ron). Maybe this will be a way for Ron to get to know Harry and the other Slytherins better. It would do him a great deal of good to learn that Slytherins aren't evil.

    Great chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks ^^. I agree, Gryffindor and Slytherin are very similar in many respecs. However, I think that, as far as the first years are concerned, Neville and Ron really are the best suited to Harry's gang; the other girls in Gryffindor have never struck me as particularly pleasant, Seamus has a long running feud with Harry and, as Dean is Seamus's best friend, I expect he'll not be too keen on burying the hatchet either. Fred and George are already friendly, so Percy, Lee, Angelina and Katie are possibilites. Oliver Wood is too obsessed with quidditch to wish to hang around Slytherins, I expect ^^.

Title: Owlets 25 Apr 2010 8:32 pm
Reviewer: Stefunny2010 (Signed) [Report This]
    I smell a friendship coming on! Well, maybe..Ron never is very predictable;) I really liked how you intorduced the owlets, I thought it was nicle done. Great job!!

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^. Ron, as you say, is unpredictable but, with Molly on the look-out, he's not going to be too unreasonable lol! I'm glad you liked the owlets ^^
Title: Not Waving, Drowning. 24 Apr 2010 12:41 pm
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    Very well done. Kudos. Not much else to say, is there?

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^  this chapter was really hard to write and I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Title: Not Waving, Drowning. 24 Apr 2010 8:13 am
Reviewer: Peg (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awe. Harry such a loving boy. I wonder, though, if he'd be so understanding if he knew that Severus was the one to tell Voldemort of the prophecy. Of course, Severus had no way of knowing that Voldemort would kill Harry's parents because of that prophecy.

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Harry's capable of great compassion and, as Severus' story is one which invites sympathy, Harry will not think badly of his father. Lucius is going to see to it that Trelawney doesn't even remember who was listening at the door on that fateful night so Harry won't find out about Severus' spying. If he did, however, I think Harry would still understand although, of course, it would be hard on him. This is why Severus is not going to tell him; no good would be achieved by it.

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