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Title: Training and Trainers 24 Mar 2010 8:06 am
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Nifty. It looks like Blaise is channeling Andrew Jackson - I believe he once said the same thing about spelling a word.

    Severus is going to kill Albus about the candy in his cauldrons.
Title: Training and Trainers 24 Mar 2010 4:06 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry is definitely beginning to bloom under the attention he is getting from Severus. This, along with the letters he is getting from his friends, will help him to see that he isn't alone and uncared about. He has friends, who miss him and who care about him.

    Charity seems like a lot of fun. I wonder if she will be the one to give a more feminine touch into Harry's life?

    Great chapter!

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm glad you like my portrayal of Charity and hope you continue to enjoy the story

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm glad you like my portrayal of Charity and hope you continue to enjoy the story
Title: Interlude 2: Letters 24 Mar 2010 3:56 am
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Haha, Lucius spoils him rotten

    Author's Response: He definately does; canon Lucius is shown to be an indulgent father (for example the Nimbus 2001's) and to love his son more than life itself- literally: he argues with the Dark Lord during the battle of Hogwarts so that he can find his son. However, as always, there's another motive; Lucius wants to be 'nice Mr Malfoy' not 'Malfoy the Death Eater' in Harry's eyes so sending a few quill-tips/sweets is a good investment.
Title: Coup d'état 24 Mar 2010 3:51 am
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Saving Hermione? Nice!

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^ Glad you liked it :)
Title: The Pensieve 24 Mar 2010 3:00 am
Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed) [Report This]
    Simply fascinating background story for Slytherin and Godric. I enjoyed the use of memory to reveal this to Harry and thus the reader. Fantastic writing.

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^ I thought that it'd be a very Slytherin tactic: show the kids other children being abused and say 'did they deserve it' and, when the child answers 'of course not', say 'well neither did you'. Psychological, manipulative and, generally speaking, effective.
Title: Training and Trainers 24 Mar 2010 1:30 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Love the story, looking forward to harry getting back with his friends, but Sev is great with him. Since he's a ward of hogwarts, can he stay with sev during the summer? Are sev and charity an item? Please post soon!

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Severus and Charity aren't in a relationship (at the moment).
Title: Training and Trainers 23 Mar 2010 11:07 pm
Reviewer: B00kw0rm92 (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful chapter! I love Harry! Can not wait for the next chapter!

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^ I'm glad you like my portrayal of Harry :)
Title: Training and Trainers 23 Mar 2010 10:42 pm
Reviewer: Slythindor (Signed) [Report This]
    This was a great chapter. Can't wait for more

    Author's Response: Thank you. I hope you continue to enjoy the story
Title: Training and Trainers 23 Mar 2010 10:28 pm
Reviewer: Stefunny2010 (Signed) [Report This]
    Ahh :) I loved it. I did think it was a bit different that you invented a holiday that normally isnt there in canon but I figured its fiction so...But I had wondered if just Harry was on leave. Having Harry learn those spells is actually a really good idea, especially if there are anymore crazy antics;) Besides that, I love that you had Chairty come to see them, and then to bring Harry tennis shoes, so sweet:) I cant wait to see what else you end up writing for this fic, great job!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks: I was thinking about a lesson for Severus to be giving Harry and, of course, Defense is the obvious choice as Severus loves it and Harry needs it. Quirell is a bit useless in the canon- no point teaching your prey to defend themselves- so I thought it'd be fun to give Severus free choice as to subject-matter: it seemed in character that he'd choose the two, foundational duelling spells plus a charm to ensure that, if your wand goes awry, you can get it back.  

    P.S. In almost all English schools, half-term holidays are around Halloween and I thought this would be a good excuse for Severus ^^. Besides, even though we're not told about it in the cannon, this might just be because nothing significant happens during half-term! It's more probable than not that Hogwarts would have half-terms; it would give the students a chance to catch uo on their schoolwork, get to know people from other houses/years and attend remedial classes if they needed them. (Not to mention that the muggleborns would probably riot if there were three whole months of school without a week off in the middle? Evil!)

     

     

Title: Culpam Poena Premit Comes 23 Mar 2010 5:59 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Dudley? Surprising!

    Author's Response: Lol, well, he had been placed under a spell which, literally, made him walk a mile in Harry's shoes- albiet in his dreams. Once Dudley had been in Harry's place, he, naturally, realised that no child deserved how Harry had been treated and, therefore, decided that his mother was a terrible person. Something similar happened in the canon, when Harry rescued Dudley from the Dementors: Dudley certainly gained respect and a degree of affection for Harry, as evinced by his behaviour at the beginning of Deathly Hallows. The reason why Dudley's behavior is so much more extreme here is 1. the abuse has been more severe, 2. Dudley is younger (ie. more impressionable) and 3. he has seen life at Privet Drive from a 'Harry's eye view'.

    Author's Response: Lol, well, he had been placed under a spell which, literally, made him walk a mile in Harry's shoes- albiet in his dreams. Once Dudley had been in Harry's place, he, naturally, realised that no child deserved how Harry had been treated and, therefore, decided that his mother was a terrible person. Something similar happened in the canon, when Harry rescued Dudley from the Dementors: Dudley certainly gained respect and a degree of affection for Harry, as evinced by his behaviour at the beginning of Deathly Hallows. The reason why Dudley's behavior is so much more extreme here is 1. the abuse has been more severe, 2. Dudley is younger (ie. more impressionable) and 3. he has seen life at Privet Drive from a 'Harry's eye view'.

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