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Title: Uroborus 20 Mar 2010 11:47 pm
Reviewer: B00kw0rm92 (Signed) [Report This]
    Awwwww! Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful chapter!!! Can't wait to see what's next!

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^ I'm really glad you enjoyed it
Title: Uroborus 20 Mar 2010 11:47 pm
Reviewer: B00kw0rm92 (Signed) [Report This]
    Awwwww! Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful chapter!!! Can't wait to see what's next!
Title: Uroborus 20 Mar 2010 8:37 pm
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Those letters were an excellent way for Harry's friends to tell him that they care and were worried about him. That he can't quite comprehend that they do think of him as a friend saddens me, but I hope that with time and support he will be able to believe it to be true. I think that Draco's letter was especially good at showing him this.

    I hope that Severus will use this time well and show Harry that he is worth being cared for. Harry needs the caring support of an adult to truly learn that what his relatives taught him was wrong. He is a wonderful child and deserves to be loved and treated well.

    Great chapter!

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm glad you enjoyed the letters. Yes, it's sad that Harry finds it hard to believe that people care about him but, after all he's been through, it's a natural response. Draco, of course, being as fiery as his father, is the most direct and, therefore, his message is very clear lol!
Title: Uroborus 20 Mar 2010 7:19 pm
Reviewer: Stefunny2010 (Signed) [Report This]
    I have really enjoyed the last three chapters:) I thought that the chapter with the ice cream was a great way to get the fluff fill before the gritty stuff. Speaking of whihc, I really liked how you did write Snape and Harry both going through a rough time at the same time. I am suprised that no one in the story thought Harry might just be going through something because of Halloween and all. I cant wait to see how Harry and Snape go through the week holiday though. Great job!

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review; thought that the 'ice-cream' chapter might be a good foil, considering how depressing the next chapter was. Harry was going down-hill slowly but surely from the second week of term, i.e. early September, and, as he was pretty woebegone from the beginning of his Hogwarts education, most of the teachers just thought that's the way Harry was and Severus was too tied up with his teaching duties and his work for the Order to notice the subtle changes. I expect some of the teachers would have just assumed Harry's sadness was due to the fact Halloween was approaching but the kids, who had seen Harry start to go downhill in early September, wouldn't have thought it likely to be linked with Halloween.
Title: Uroborus 20 Mar 2010 6:51 pm
Reviewer: Shadow (Anonymous) [Report This]
    The chapters are getting better and better =o) Well done!!! =D

    Author's Response:

    Thanks ^^ I hope you continue to enjoy the story

Title: Deliver Me 20 Mar 2010 10:31 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, another great chapter! It seems like a lot is going on here, what with the fish meals and the song, and then Harry starting to feel isolated. I'm glad that Hagrid noticed and that Severus was there to save him from the troll. Now they just have to figure out what's going on!

    Looking forward to the next one! And your very welcome! I'm enjoying your story.

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review ^^. I'm glad you're enjoying the story :) 
Title: Deliver Me 20 Mar 2010 9:28 am
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, just wow.

    What is going on with the fish and the song from Severus' childhood? It is almost like he is being haunted. And poor Harry seems to be under a curse.

    Looking forward to more.

    Author's Response:

    As Severus was young (5-6) when his father died, the things that Severus most remembers of his Da are 1. his father's 'fish cooking' song, 2. the smell of cooked fish and 3. the feeling of security and love. Lets just say that the more depressed Harry became, the more severely Severus was haunted by the smell of fish, the song and, last but not least, the dreams.

Title: Interlude 2: Letters 20 Mar 2010 9:26 am
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    I love the letters from Lucius to Draco and the way he signs them "Daddy"

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^ They are based, to some extent, on letters I and my brothers sent to my parents and the letters my parents sent to their grandparents :)
Title: Deliver Me 20 Mar 2010 8:44 am
Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous) [Report This]
    brilliant chapter. I love the story and can't wait for more. I like the way you portray Snape and Harry

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the review ^^

Title: Deliver Me 20 Mar 2010 1:58 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Poor harry, emotional abuse is harder to get over than anything else. Harry needs to feel he's important. Great chapter.

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Yes, definately: however, although Harry will never totally get over the abuse, he can be healed to a great extent

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