Potions and Snitches
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Title: Concrete Angel 15 Mar 2010 10:04 pm
Reviewer: Stefunny2010 (Signed) [Report This]
    Thats so sad. I really dont understand how some people can actually do these things. That being said, I really did enjoy this chapter. I am really itching to see how Harry is going to react to all of what has happened. Great job!

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review. In real life, such abuse cases are rare but they happen- and worse- and it creates an interesting scenario.
Title: Concrete Angel 15 Mar 2010 9:53 pm
Reviewer: ForgottenEllipses (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh wow! You used one of my absolute favorite musicals!!!! :D We did that last year in my high school and I was the lead role, the Narrator. But it's been a family favorite ever since I was little. Fyi, just a side note: the actual official name is "Joseph and the Amazing Technicolor Dreamcoat".

    Just had to comment on that. I'm interested to see where this story is going.....I'd like to see some more Snape/Harry action, bring a bit of angst and drama. I know right now you're doing a lot of setting up, but I feel we've not seen enough into Harry's psych.

    Author's Response: I know, it's taken me quite a few chapters to set up the situation but I thought it'd be more in keeping with Severus's character if he worked behind the scenes for a while- just as he did in Philosopher's Stone. However, from this chapter in we're going to be seeing a lot more Severus/Harry action: if Severus thought that he could discharge his duties by being a guardian angel- someone who watches over Harry without having much to do with him- he has quite another thing coming! Thanks for the review.
Title: Quills and Inquisition 15 Mar 2010 3:05 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    What a place to end, can't wait to see this conversation. I hope petunia gets hers good. Great chapter, please post soon!

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^: I know, I'm cruel with my cliffhangers but it was such a perfect place for one I couldn't resist lol!
Title: Quills and Inquisition 14 Mar 2010 11:00 pm
Reviewer: B00kw0rm92 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I can't wait for the next chapter. Should DEFINITLY be interesting!

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I hope you enjoy the next chapter :)
Title: Quills and Inquisition 14 Mar 2010 9:26 pm
Reviewer: KKJ (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Nice interaction between Harry, Draco, and Blaise. I liked Severus and Charity as well. I am looking forward to seeing what unfolds in the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^ I'm glad you enjoyed the interaction between the characters ^^
Title: Quills and Inquisition 14 Mar 2010 9:12 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Yes. Love it. Can't wait to see how the visit between Snape and Petunia goes. I like the idea of bringing Charity along. Well done on this chapter! Thanks for the update!

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^ I'm really glad you are enjoying this story
Title: Quills and Inquisition 14 Mar 2010 8:59 pm
Reviewer: Stefunny2010 (Signed) [Report This]
    I really like how this is playing out so far. I don't normally read fics where Harry is sorted into Slytherin but I like everything about this, especially how Harry seems to be making friends with Draco and Blaise, I like how you are characterizing all of them. Great job!!

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^ I'm really glad you are enjoying the story and like my interpretation of the childrens' characters
Title: Quills and Inquisition 14 Mar 2010 8:40 pm
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Signed) [Report This]
    must have more soon. been waiting for this chapter

    Author's Response: I know, I've been very mean keeping you all in suspense like this. However, did I want to give this fic a sense of realism: although Severus is pretty canny and has a fair few resourses at his fingertips, putting together a case against someone takes time (and, of course, whilst Severus is gathering evidence, Harry is settling into Slytherin). I hope the daily updates make the suspense bearable!
Title: Quills and Inquisition 14 Mar 2010 8:04 pm
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad to see Harry making friends so readily in Slytherin. I wonder if Draco will become less full of himself in time? lol

    I can't wait to see what Severus is going to do to dear old Petunia. I hope he is deliciously mean to her.

    Great chapter!

    Author's Response:

    I will give you three things to think upon:

    1. Severus has a book written by Slytherin.
    2. Slytherin was very... practical in his approach to child protection.
    3. As we know from chapter 2, Slytherin was brilliant and had a dark sense of humour.

    Three guesses as to the content of a fairly long chapter of the aforesaid book ;)

Title: Valentine Recursat 14 Mar 2010 3:15 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow. Go Severus, go! And I like extremely how Poppy is being involved in this story. Harry must be a mess.. are any of his bones going to have to be re-broken and set? Poor kid. I like all the memories you added in too. Well done. Thanks for the update! Please keep writing!

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^ I'm glad you're enjoying it; Harry's been really badly abused but it's the psychological wounds which are the most destructive

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