Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: The Slytherin Inquisition 17 May 2011 12:09 am
Reviewer: Lira (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I very much agree with your depictions of the Slytherin Crew. To be honest, I always found JK's depiction of all her villains, both the "soft" villains inside Hogwarts and the "hard" villains outside the school, to be very flat. You've done well giving them depth, while retaining the aspects which were hinted at in canon.
Title: Parties and Parselmouths 16 May 2011 9:48 pm
Reviewer: Lira (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Beautiful chapter; the part with Salazar was very moving. I very much like your portrayal of him, the depth you've given both to Salazar and Severus. Well done again!
Title: Concrete Angel 16 May 2011 9:48 pm
Reviewer: Lira (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This story is excellent in all ways; conspicuously well crafted, original and well thought out. The characters are in character, with the motives for their "selves" laid bare. Really well done! I must also agree with your notes; favoring one child over another, even without neglect, can lead to serious problems. An original and pleasing revenge for Severus!
Title: Epilogue 22 Apr 2011 11:53 am
Reviewer: DestinedMommy (Signed) [Report This]
    i absolutely loved it!!! keep up the good wrk it was brilliantly written!!
Title: Interlude: Letters. 22 Mar 2011 9:54 pm
Reviewer: Iscream (Anonymous) [Report This]
    The "Daddy" part in which Lucius replies to Draco is Hillarious! I really enjoy reading your story

    Author's Response:

    Thanks; I love writing Draco and Lucius: I feel that Lucius is the daddy panther- all grace, power and presence- and Draco is his little cub, who tries to copy Lucius but ends up looking cute but slightly ridiculous because he doesn't have the maturity or subtlety lol! Of course, Lucius is trying to teach his son and, as he is mature and subtle, he does it soooo smoothly ^^. I'm glad you're enjoying the story

Title: Prefects and Physicals 22 Mar 2011 9:43 pm
Reviewer: Spark (Anonymous) [Report This]
    What was with putting three 'l's' on the female prefect's speech? I apologize if I sound offensive, it's not my intention.

    Author's Response: No offence taken; the multiple L's are supposed to mimic the Welsh accent- Rhiannon is a Welsh name, after all! (Terry Pratchett uses this to great effect in Soul Music and, besides I thought the soft musicality of her accent would form a nice contrast to Flint's rougher accent)
Title: A Slither of Snakes 04 Mar 2011 12:17 am
Reviewer: Blueowl (Signed) [Report This]
    Cute snake. :3
Title: Parties and Parselmouths 03 Mar 2011 9:39 pm
Reviewer: Blueowl (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting chat with Salazar. Wonder what will come of it.
Title: The Pensieve 03 Mar 2011 7:11 pm
Reviewer: Blueowl (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked being shown the history of things. Very insightful.
Title: Uroborus 03 Mar 2011 6:51 pm
Reviewer: Blueowl (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome. I liked the letters.

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