omg so sad! i'm sorry harry!
| Title: Pandora's Box
| 04 Apr 2014 1:18 pm
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| Reviewer: Anna (Anonymous)
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I hope you get the chance to write more of this in the future!
Hope to read more of this wonderful story in the future!
I hope you continue this story at some point...it is very good :)
Okay, so why do Lucius, I'm assuming, have to do with everything? I'm curious now. How is Harry going to react when he has to go back to Dumbledore's world? What will Harry's relationship with Snape be like? They could easily make it look like they are becoming friendly and Dumbles would not be the wiser since he believes that Snape hates Tom for "killing" Lily.
I love how you are taking the slow but steady approach to building up Harry and Severus' relationship. I'm looking forward to reading more and seeing that relationship grow to father and son. (Or at least having Harry acknowledge that Snape is his dad!)
Aw, shoot! I came to the end and don't know what happens next! Great job on this major overhaul. I really like that you took some time to explain the 'creature' aspect of the story rather than just assuming it should make sense.
Wow. This story certainly turns Albus Dumbledore's actions on their side. I can't wait to see how things unfold.
Another great story from you. I am hooked and off to the next chapter.
Wow, I don't know why, but I thought I had read this one. I'm so excited. This looks really interesting.
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