Beautifully written. I liked how you chose to reveal just a portion of the possible abuse Harry has suffered over the years as Severus read his file and stopped reading after a certain point. Sinistra's interference was nice as well and allowed Harry to break the silence with commentary on her, which was safer ground than everything else which hung between them. I am looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm glad you're enjoying it. :)
Loved the look at what happened through the pensieve as it revealed quite a bit. Snape's accompanying actions and emotions as he watched were marvelously drawn.
Author's Response: I didn't know how far to go in depth with his emotions when writing it. Thanks for the review. :)
| Title: Decisions
| 01 Apr 2010 11:12 pm
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| Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous)
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Oh I loved that I look forward to more
Author's Response: Thanks. :)
Oooooh. I really like this story! I hope you update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm glad you enjoy it. :)
Um... Non magical attack? Surprising! Interesting too
Author's Response: I pondered the idea of it being a magical attack, but my thinking behind it was that if Nott and them did a magical attack then they were saying Harry and Draco were worth having magic wasted on them. I know...rather cryptic. Thanks for the review. :)
Sinistra? What a nice surprise! M.
Author's Response: Just wait for some of the later chapters. She gets a bit scarier. :) Thanks for the review.
| Title: Slytherin’s Official Welcoming Committee
| 01 Apr 2010 5:01 pm
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| Reviewer: little-sun (Signed)
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Haha, the description of teachers, hahaha!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked that little bit of humor. Thanks for the review. :)
And I thought Severus could be nasty! I definitely have a whole new level of respect for Aurora Sinistra. Hopefully, her softening of the room will be enough for him to talk some sense into the majority of the Slytherin House...
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Unfortunately, I don't really continue with Snape and his House discussion in the next chapter. I figured it was pretty much the highlight right there with Sinistra. Thank you. :)
| Title: Putting the Fear of God in Them
| 01 Apr 2010 3:57 am
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| Reviewer: amsilcox (Signed)
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Excellent chapter!!!!! Sinistra is diabolically evil when she wants to be. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you. And she is definitely that. Hope you enjoy the next two chapters. :)
| Title: Putting the Fear of God in Them
| 01 Apr 2010 1:53 am
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| Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous)
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I really love aurora. Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks. :)
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