Ooh, I can't wait to see if the plan works.
Great chappie. Can't wait for more.
Love it. Missing the Sev & Harry interactions, but I shall survive. Didn't think I would like the song but I did. Can't wait for another update.
I am so sad that Harry had to go back. Will he go to Hogwarts?
I'm all choked up and there are tears running down my face. Sev you big idiot.
I'm really frustrated with Snape! I really hope you update again soon. I'm loving this story.
| Title: The Little Details
| 23 Oct 2010 6:18 pm
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| Reviewer: ObsessiveaboutSnape (Anonymous)
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Severus, in this story, is an idiot. Just sayng. That said, this is brilliant. Well done
| Title: Wherefore Art Thou?
| 11 Jun 2010 9:41 pm
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| Reviewer: anonymous (Anonymous)
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I really enjoy this story. Just be careful of some technical errors.
Take, for example, this sentence: "Harry... proceeded to step out of the alley and peer around at the streets that looked vastly different to several hours ago."
The phrase is "different from" not different to", and written as is, the sentence literally compares "the streets" to "several hours". I believe your intention was to compare Harry's surroundings at the moment to that of several hours ago.
These mistakes can deter some readers but are easily fixed with a fellow editor or a careful read-through.
The story's plot is wonderful. The details from Harry's point of view are captivating and heartwarming. I definitely hope you'll continue this soon. I'm looking forward to more :)
Oh, oh, oh!!!!!!!! It's gr8, the way Harry's emotions have been potrayed. I gave u 9 outtta 10 coz u haven't finished, and one can't judge a story until it reaches its climax.
| Title: Wherefore Art Thou?
| 03 Jun 2010 7:00 pm
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| Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous)
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wow I look forward to what is to come!
I can't wait until father and son will be reunited. I saw the youtube video and this story has been stuck in my head. Keep up the good work and please update ASAP. :)
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