Very nice introduction. I love it. I think you might have made a mistake in this sentence though:
"Albus atempted to hide his disappointment, but she too notice..."
Albus wasn't with Lucy as she was leaving, it was Aberforth. Love it. On to the next chapter. :D
| Title: A Night Out
| 02 Apr 2011 4:56 am
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| Reviewer: urshurak (Anonymous)
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Hi, I like your story very much, but do yourself a favour and find a new beta.
| Title: Epilogue
| 27 Mar 2011 9:13 pm
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| Reviewer: Spinstergp (Anonymous)
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This has been a lovely story. Now that it is finished, I intend to read it again, from begining to end.
Thank you again.
This is a great story and I had a wonderful time following it! Can't wait for the sequel, keep up the good work!
Lovely end to the saga. Thanks for sharing this story with us.
Very beautiful end to your story, MA. I really loved the ceremony, especially the joining of Harry to Snape and Lucy.
OH my God...what a great story. I love this. well done, well written, you did a marvelous job. absolutely grand!!!!
| Title: Epilogue
| 25 Mar 2011 7:44 pm
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| Reviewer: yesIam (Anonymous)
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Excellent ending to a lovely, original, brilliantly written story.
WOW!!! Love it, love it! Wonderful finish. Sequel????? Now, I will spend the weekend reading it again from start to finish!!!
| Title: Epilogue
| 25 Mar 2011 3:10 pm
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| Reviewer: Daemonwinterx (Anonymous)
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Absolutely brilliant. A beuatiful story and wonderful characters. A delightfull story to read and I was sad to see it end. But then you mentioned a sequel, yeah!!!!!We don't have to say goodbye yet.
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