| Title: Chapter 11 - Not Quite Terrible Twos
| 20 Jul 2010 2:33 am
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| Reviewer: Adah (Signed)
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I *cried* while reading this. I think it was sometime during the letter.
I love Snape's way of responding to Harry's paraphasia by taking it in stride. It's so parental Snape, I adore it.
I also am completely impressed by the way you dealt with Harry's horcrux removal, assigning him issues that stroke victims usually have, it's quite clever.
I think I'm actually going to go through this chapter and read it again, that's how beautiful I thought it was.
Fantastic.
Author's Response: Aww, I didn't mean to make anyone cry. But thank you for the lovely note. :) The paraphasia is a bit of a challenge to write, but something that I think would be realistic for the circumstances. I will be taking small artistic license with some of the side effects and treatments, but you are correct in your statement that it's similar to a stroke.
Thank you again for the kind words, and I hope you enjoy the next bits just as much!