You make me want to go to Amsterdam so badly. It's a bit scary the thought of Harry being so damaged by the removal of the Horcrux. If I was Harry, I can't say I'd think too much about the greater benefit, with such a potential sacrifice. Good thing it's Harry's job to save the world I suppose.
| Title: Chapter 8 - Christmas is all around
| 07 Jul 2010 8:31 pm
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Fabulous! I loved this chapter! What a wonderful scene at the end, and Snape's comment about when he last saw such a display, and when he expects to see it again. Great chapter! Wonderful story. :0 Thanks so much for writing and sharing it with us!
Awww, how cute :D Update soon!
| Title: Chapter 8 - Christmas is all around
| 07 Jul 2010 10:58 am
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| Reviewer: DS (Anonymous)
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| Title: Chapter 8 - Christmas is all around
| 07 Jul 2010 7:59 am
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| Reviewer: Severa (Signed)
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This chapter really touched me. I'm not sure why, but I think it is because you captured exactly what having a first "real" Christmas would feel like to someone who was neglected for most of their life. You are also becoming really effective at the sentimental Harry-Snape moments; they seem very real and very special, without coming off as sappy or out of character. I can't wait to read more!
Excellent!!! There's a reason I've chosen this as 1 of my fav, u no.........go on!
I'm glad that Harry and Severus' Christmas celebration went so well and hope that they will have many more to come. With luck, Harry won't lose as much as Severus fears, despite the location of the horcrux...
| Title: Chapter 7 - A Presence of Mind
| 06 Jul 2010 5:25 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved this chapter even though I love the de-age ones best can Harry be de-aged in Holland so he can have a child's Christmas Please!!!
| Title: Chapter 7 - A Presence of Mind
| 06 Jul 2010 1:48 pm
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| Reviewer: karee (Signed)
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Thanks for the update...can't wait to read more, how long its this story?
Author's Response: I've no idea. Another three or four chapters, I think, with some one shots planned as well. :) Thanks for the review :D
| Title: Chapter 7 - A Presence of Mind
| 05 Jul 2010 12:11 am
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| Reviewer: Perri (Anonymous)
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This chapter felt different, good different. Not that I don't like how the other chapters feel. I want to know more about the Snape flying business I forgot to mention that in my last review. Also thank you for answering my question that one time. As always you blow me away with the story and how well written it is. Thanks!
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