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Title: Chapter 4 - Clicking into Place 19 Jun 2010 9:41 am
Reviewer: Shadow (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Super chapter!
    I hope that Dumbledore comes to realize that Snape is now a father and if Snape murder him, it would be very bad both for Elliot and for Severus. If Dumbles want to die, he can drink some poison... I think that Dumbles think only about himself and not others (in the matter of his death).
    ...So I hope that you will not stick to the original book =o)
Title: Chapter 4 - Clicking into Place 19 Jun 2010 9:27 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, poor Harry. But I'm glad that Ron finally saw the light.

    I'm so glad that Ron and Hermione had a chance to see how good Snape has been to Harry, and how their friend has a piece of normalcy with Snape. He's not expected to be the saviour of the wizarding world; just an ordinary boy, who is loved and cared for by his new father.

    I really love this story and I hope that you win the award. You deserve it.
Title: Chapter 3 -Bargins and Bad Dreams 19 Jun 2010 6:06 am
Reviewer: Susana R (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Another enjoyable chapter! I love how you are writing Harry as clever yet still in need of affection and guidance, and Snape as caring and parental but still snarky. Always a joy to see you have posted again.
Title: Chapter 4 - Clicking into Place 19 Jun 2010 6:01 am
Reviewer: Sevie Prince (Signed) [Report This]
    I love your ff, becouse is such... homey. your Snape is the best and please tell me that he won't die!!!
Title: Chapter 4 - Clicking into Place 19 Jun 2010 4:43 am
Reviewer: orpheneritus (Signed) [Report This]
    Loving Ron does require a tolerance for his hotheadedness, but got to love those Weasleys!
Title: Chapter 4 - Clicking into Place 19 Jun 2010 3:35 am
Reviewer: love_it (Signed) [Report This]
    I really hope Snape will keep Harry safe and away from Dumbledore's dangerous schemes! Honestly, how can he expect such a young boy to sacrifice so much? Good thing he is learning to deal with his problems in a more Slytherin manner... and with a parent to guide him.
Title: Chapter 3 -Bargins and Bad Dreams 17 Jun 2010 7:14 pm
Reviewer: Perri (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I just love this story. I'm a little confused about the line"Not all affection need be bargained for, little Slytherin." I think it's just me being silly, but I would really appreciate some clarification. That's not to say you story isn't clear. Look what I've done, messing everything up. Anyway I love the story. Sorry for rambling. Thank you.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the review!  I was referring to this bit:

    However, he'd also been able to give in a little more to some of his more basic desires, and Snape had not once really chastised him for playing exuberantly, laughing at silly things, or needing a hug or two. [...] Snape didn't need to know that Harry looked forward to something like that.

    [...]

    "Alright. But again I'm not fully responsible for how I act."

     

Title: Chapter 3 -Bargins and Bad Dreams 17 Jun 2010 5:21 pm
Reviewer: love_it (Signed) [Report This]
    I really love this! I always look forward to your updates, because each chapter makes me feel warm and fuzzy ;)
Title: Chapter 3 -Bargins and Bad Dreams 17 Jun 2010 3:43 pm
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    Wanted to read the entire story before I reviewed. I love how Harry and Sev's relationship is coming. Wish Harry would tell Ron and Hermine though. I love Harry as a 6 yr old. That cream, some sort of "truth" potion, or just one that relaxes you so much it losens your mouth?? I await your next installment. Thank you!
Title: Chapter 3 -Bargins and Bad Dreams 16 Jun 2010 8:16 pm
Reviewer: orpheneritus (Signed) [Report This]
    So sweet! I am wondering what Malfoy is up to.

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