| Title: Chapter 14 - You're Home Again
| 21 Aug 2022 6:51 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Thanks for this superb story! It was, and always is, a great read.
| Title: Chapter 13 - The Stain of Ink
| 21 Aug 2022 6:19 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Thanks for the great chapter! I hope a certain beetle is caught. Thanks for including the scene with Neville.
| Title: Chapter 12 - A Broken Thesaurus
| 21 Aug 2022 6:04 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Harry’s phrases from the paraphasia are very interesting. I like how supportive Hermione and Ron were, and how Snape is pushing Harry to overcome his teenage tendency towards acedia (great word!) in a very believable way.
| Title: Chapter 11 - Not Quite Terrible Twos
| 21 Aug 2022 4:40 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Dumbledore’s apology was very nicely done, as was your characterization of a young Harry with older, albeit slightly impaired, mental faculties — a delicate balance that you pulled off splendidly!
| Title: Chapter 10 - No Turning Back
| 20 Aug 2022 9:04 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Great finale! I love how the definition of “Dumbledore” was woven in.
Wow, you sure know how to write a riveting chapter.
| Title: Chapter 4 - Clicking into Place
| 19 Aug 2022 4:28 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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That was a typical Ron reaction, though I’m glad that he came around relatively quickly. The evidence of Harry’s comfort and belonging in Snape’s and his home was hard to refute.
| Title: Chapter 8 - Christmas is all around
| 18 Aug 2022 5:55 pm
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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I love the song references that took me back to those years long ago. Snape was as enjoyably witty as always.
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