Title: Disputations
| 29 Sep 2012 4:02 pm
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Reviewer: Nes (Signed)
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I've been waiting for more than a year for a new chapter. This looked very promising. I love how you made Voldemort able to go to the extent to curse himself to hurt Harry. I wonder how Sev will react to that later... I also quite like how you wrote Dumbledore. Write more, please?
i have a feeling this pain is going to help bring snape around
I really really hope you continue on this - it has so much potential! Please keep working on it? You could certainly take this in interesting places, considering I've read or at least started over well over 1000 HP fics and none of them have talked about this subject in the way you have before. To be honest, not many even broach the subject of a story based solely around possessions, to begin with. I'm very intrigued as to where this will go.
Wow, this is really creepy. I look forward to seeing what happens next. It would seem that Snape has a reason to treat Harry nicely now so that thoughts of him don't give Voldemort a way into Harry's head
Title: Disputations
| 28 Jun 2010 5:33 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great chapter I like the crackling between Severus and Harry thank you
Author's Response: No, thank YOU :)
Very intense! Love the premise.
Author's Response: I'm glad :] I worked hard on it
Title: Disputations
| 27 Jun 2010 4:30 am
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Reviewer: Lisa (Anonymous)
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Wow, I love you story! It's a fabulous idea for a fic and you write it so well. Poor Harry though, I can't imagine how that must be like. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: I most certainly will, thanks so much :D
Title: Disputations
| 27 Jun 2010 12:38 am
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Reviewer: Anon #37 (Anonymous)
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Short but intense! No lack of action here! Well written.
Author's Response: Thank you very much :)
You did an excellent job of portraying Harry's feelings. This is all very normal of him to distrust Snape; afterall...the man has treated him horribly.
I can't wait to read more from you.
Author's Response: I'm working on it as we speak =]
um...ouch?
Author's Response: I know right, lol :)
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