Great interaction between Severus and Dumbledore; I loved how you portrayed Severus' anguish, despair and sense of betrayal.
Author's Response: Thanks. :D
| Title: Violence Begets Violence
| 10 Jul 2010 8:50 pm
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| Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
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Very interesting chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks. :)
Great character interaction. I hope Harry adds up the clues before doing something he regrets.
Author's Response: Thanks. :)
The change of focus between the first and second chapter works particularly well. Your portrayal of Severus' emotions and physical state is very powerful and contrasts vividly with the dramatic irony of the last chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks. :D I thought we needed to see both sides of the story here. I'm glad you liked it.
Very atmospheric, brooding first chapter; an interesting and realistic portrayal of Harry's feelings towards Severus
Author's Response: I tried to make sure that we could all feel Harry's anger. Thanks for the review. :)
I wish that Albus would tell Harry that Snape is innocent, and that he was the one who asked Snape to kill him.
Great chappie.
Author's Response: I wished for that too, but Albus is a bit of an old stubborn coot sometimes. :) Thanks.
Oh boy! I'm not anxious to see what Harry does to Snape!
Yikes, fireworks!
Great chappie.
Author's Response: I hoped it lived up to your expectation. Thanks for the review. :)
Oh Harry!
I hope that he rethinks this foolish plan of his!
Great start Lady.
Author's Response: Thanks, Pandora. :)
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