This was really good! I loved how you portray Harry's emotions so well.
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| 16 Nov 2013 3:19 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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| Title: Snapped
| 16 Jun 2011 8:08 pm
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| Reviewer: The End (Anonymous)
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I really love this fic, I can feel Harry's anger. It makes my heart pound. Please continue it.
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| 14 Jul 2010 9:34 pm
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| Reviewer: Lanie (Anonymous)
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You did an excellent job showing Harry's emotions and making the situation believable. I do hope you continue this into a longer story, even if it's only a few more chapters! I desperately want to know what Snape will do and how he will act toward Harry on their next meeting.
Author's Response: I'm really glad you liked it. At the moment, I don't know whether or not I'll extend the story at all, seeing as it is written as a stand alone piece, but if I get any ideas I'll be sure to post them.
OH very very nice!bravo harry!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. It was almost therapeutic for me to write this piece.
The piece stands very well on it's own, so strickly speaking, it doesn't need a sequel. On the other hand, I really like the writing style a lot, so I would like to see more from the author. Also, it may seem like the work of a moment to punch a teacher in the nose, but it seems challenging to figure out what would happen next....
Author's Response: At the moment, I'm quite busy with a chapter story in a different fandom and it's taking up a lot of my time. Of course, the muse is a fickle thing so who knows?
Very well written, I liked your use of imagery and the character interactions.
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm really glad you liked it.
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