I really loved this chapter, especially Severus losing it with Dumbledore. I'm glad that he has finally accepted that he was wrong about Harry being spoiled and conceited. I can't wait to see what comes next.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm really glad; I was a little worried about whether I took things too far in that scene- even though I felt Severus' reaction in character- so I'm very pleased that it was well received
Wow, that was a totally unexpected change and something I've never seen happen in any story. Congratulations on blowing me away. Very well written and frightening as well.
Author's Response: Thanks: I really wanted to write a 'twisty' tale and I'm glad whenever one of my plot twist comes as a surprise to the reader because, as someone who reads way too many books, I always find the more unpredictable stories most entertaining. Thanks for the review and I hope you continue to enjoy the fic :)
Wicked!
Author's Response: Thanks lol! Or, as Myrridin would say... (heehee)
Great chapter! Severus could be a really good teacher, if he could get over his petty vindictive attitude, that is. I liked the reasoning behind his clothes and the book is a nice touch. Hopefully he and Harry can learn to get along better soon.
Author's Response: Thanks :) Yes, Severus' problem really is his attitude but, appeasing Voldemort's spies aside, it's a bit of a vicious circle; if the children treat him with disrespect/disobedience, he'll terrorise them and, of course, certain children will respond in kind. I'm glad you like the reasoning behind his clothes; it's always struck me that his close-fitting 'film' outfit is perfect for duelling.
Amazing explanations, wonderful writing, deep and clever insights. This is fast becoming my favorite story and I hope it is of epic length before it's through.
Author's Response: Thanks (blushes); I'm really glad that you're enjoying it. At present, the story is only twelve chapters long but, if people like this particular alternate universe, then I could always write a sequel or two ^^
Wonderful new story! I love this chapter and the way this man saved the students and prepared a way for new students to be safe. Great idea!
Author's Response: Thanks ^^ I'm glad you liked the back-story although, admittedly, the idea of a "safe corridor" was Jan's, I just created a history behind it lol.
I am glad that Dumbledores trinkets got destroyed in your story too ;) it is my fav scene.
Author's Response: Thanks ^^ It just felt right including that event in the scene, after all, if Harry was furious *after* Sirius' death, just how angry would he be to hear that Dumbledore was going to do nothing to *prevent* Severus' death?
Ha! Is Rita a DE?
Author's Response: Nope, Rita's just a amoral little muckraker lol! Thanks for the review
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This was a very intriguing story. I really enjoyed the Hagrid part--very unusual and it works! Thanks for a great story. I really enjoyed it.
Author's Response: Thanks ^^ I'm really glad you enjoyed it.
What a plot! Wonderful! M.
Author's Response: Thanks ^^ I'm really glad you're enjoying it.
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