That last section, in the past - pure brilliance! I love it! This whole chapter was good. In fact, I fear I may be becoming redundant because every chapter of this is so awesome I can hardly think of anything else to say about them. ^^
Really looking forward to the next chapter - hope we see it soon!
Oooh - I like this chapter. Somehow, I missed it before; dunno how. I love how you've portrayed their collective and individual responses to discovering what Dumbledore has done.
Simply excellent.
| Title: Chapter 16
| 04 Apr 2011 5:36 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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So sorry you have been ill I hope you are better now. Great chapter with wonderful feeling, you bring over the despair so well. Also thank you for so much Dumbledore bashing he deserves it
Utterly, absolutely GORGEOUS! Every new chapter astounds me withthe power of this story. Bravissimi!
Deep, soul shaking chapter.
You had me quite nervous there near the end. I'm so glad that Erasmus decided that he didn't want to die. That's a huge step for him.
Thanks for sharing another wonderful chapter with us. I'm glad that you're feeling better.
very powerful start! can't wait to read more!
Incredible chapter. Update soon :D
I couldn't help myself...I read all 15 chapters today and I can't wait until you are able to update :D
Very insightful and moving. Great chapter.
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