| Title: Chapter 15
| 08 Mar 2011 4:11 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Wow what a cliff hanger you have outdone yourself! Thank you so much it's a wonderful story and the way you handle the characters is really amazing thank you so much
Another wonderful chapter Bil!
Oh wow. Update soon. I can't wait to see what happens next. Poor Eramus.
A beautiful chapter, so well-written, but painful; the emotions are so raw. I'm so glad that Hermione figured out Severus' identity (and that Minerva helped as much as she could). Erasmus needed to know, I think, before he can fully heal.
Hermione is right about Dumbledore...he does love, but his great flaw of always trying to manage everyone, disregarding their own feelings, is so difficult and hurtful for those who are affected.
The flashbacks have been hard to read...I hate suffering...but finally, a sign of hope in it all. I can't wait to read the rest, though I will miss this story once it's finished!
Looking forward to more!
amazing. I love how you have captured their healing
Another excellent chapter! Your cliffhangers, though. I'm sure I must've said it before, but those are bound to kill me dead!
Hope you update soon!
OMG! I've finally read this story, caught up to where you are now, and it's a cliff hanger! ARG! PLEASE update soon! I'm LOVING this! I wonder if Erasmus will get his memory back now that he knows who he is? Or not? Can't WAIT to find out! PLEASE update soon!!!
Such beautiful prose. I loved the scene of Harry and Hermione watching the sunrise. Incredible.
Maybe I'll find this out in the next chapters, but is Harry's wand now embedded in his skin? Or did I misread that? It would be fascinating if it was, and it would make a comment Hermione made earlier about Erasmus not seeing Harry's wand and Hermione saying "no I suppose not" make more sense... :-)
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