Wonderful piece of work. Heartwrenching and inspiring and all at once, and incredibly original.
Love it!
I'm getting so drawn into the characters and I feel I can really see who they are and what they feel, and that is really a sign of excellent writing.
This must be really hard to write, allthe way around. So much pain in each character, each chapter.
It's good and moving, but painful.
Can't wait to see what happens next :D
| Title: Chapter 12
| 18 Dec 2010 5:23 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great chapter love the way you are handling the two time zones and interaction between them
Oh no there has to be more please update when you can thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Every chapter I love this story just a little bit more. I have no idea how you manage to sustain the level of intensity and yet the pacing is perfect. I suspect it's all down to that wonderfully calm and dry narrative voice.
I know exactly why Dumbledore has to lie to Severus and yet I still hate him for it. I know Harry's almost got it and I suspect once he talks to Hermione they'll both understand. But Erasmus is going to figure out something soon, and given his propensity for jumping to conclusions, I can't wait to see how that goes.
That was intense and painful. good, but painful
Oh wow. This is so thought provoking, so intense. I can't wait to see what happens next. Hope you can update soon :D
| Title: Chapter 11
| 06 Dec 2010 5:21 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Wonderful chapter especially the last part thank you
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