They all believe Draco died in the fire, why can't Severus make him younger so no one would be suspicious and any cover story would work too fool everyone around them. He could be an older brother for the other two.
Poor Draco. And poor Sev to have such a sad memory. Looking forward to the rest :)
I like the addition of Draco to the family unit that you've been building. There was a lot of great action in this chapter. Nice work. Quite an exciting read.
Aw, how sad!!! And yet I'm kinda happy at the idea of Harry and Hermione getting Draco back ... but I really do feel awful for him. Please update soon!!!
awww, my heart grew warmer reading this as well!!!
This is such a cute story, thank-you so much for posting it!
Yes, that's Hermoine allright xD
And I really liked how you portrayed Harry here, it seems real
Jumping onto the next one now xD
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| 05 Oct 2010 4:08 pm
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Wonderful description of the fire and a great chapter thank you
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| 04 Oct 2010 7:40 pm
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Aww, poor Draco!
I loved the puppet show, though!!
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| 04 Oct 2010 7:36 pm
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Great chapter..poor Draco
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| 04 Oct 2010 3:42 pm
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That was totally unexpected! A bit out of the blue too, though it certainly adds another dimension to the story.
How did the fire start? What happened to the diary? Who was using it? I hope you will explain more in the next chapter. I am happy that this means Draco gets to live Sev now!
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