Such a good chapter. It actually disturbs me how much I'm enjoying 4yr old Harry and Hermione. I think it's because the OTT-cute Hermione actually balances the ultra-vulnerable Harry really well. With her drawing most of the attention of those around, Harry seems to feel able to open up a bit more. Great job with both of them.
Love what you've done with Draco in this chapter ... and 'suicide ridge' ... priceless! LOL!
| Title: A Day With Draco
| 02 Oct 2010 1:07 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved Draco please can he stay in the story! Sorry about your loss I have lost 3 dogs in my life and each one tears at you
Aww, so very very cute!!! I love your Draco - the seriously abused versions of him that are out there are just so far from canon but yours is perfect and so cute with Harry and Hermione... just awww... and sorry about Maddie, that's always hard and dedicating something you've written to her is lovely.
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Aw, very cute chapter! I loved that Draco has learned to get along with little Harry and Hermione...and hope that it will continue when/if they are re-aged.
It's really great to see Severus unbending and having some fun with the children. The shaving scene was adorable and tobogganing sounded fun until Sev's accident. Draco is pretty brave...maybe he should have been in Gryffindor!
I'm sorry about your dog. My dog died a year ago, and even though she had a long and happy life, it was still hard and I still miss her. She was one of the family.
*Sniffle* Poor Draco! I'm so glad he was able to play with Harry and Hermione (although I wasn't happy with how he tricked Severus with Suicide Ridge). This was a bittersweet chapter because this was the sort of fun and loving day that all of them should have as a regular thing, and it's obvious that for Harry and Draco, at least, it's not.
I'm so sorry to hear about the loss of your dog. I hope that the good memories of your life with him will ease your sorrow.
You did a great job with Draco, and I am looking forward to the next chapter.
You did a great job with Draco!
I just found your story and I love it!
The shaving scene was adorable! I remember 'shaving' w/ my dad when I really little despite being a girl. It brought back good memories. :)
Anyway I can't wait to read more!
| Title: A Day With Draco
| 29 Sep 2010 7:22 pm
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| Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous)
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| Title: A Day With Draco
| 29 Sep 2010 6:41 pm
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| Reviewer: jessirose85 (Anonymous)
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I thought the chapter was brillant and I am absolutely loving this story and hope you will continue writing with more chapters xx
| Title: A Day With Draco
| 29 Sep 2010 5:33 pm
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| Reviewer: Ray22 (Anonymous)
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I love this chapter!
Definitly my fave so far!
Please continue!
I especially love Harry-Hermione-Draco Moments
| Title: A Day With Draco
| 29 Sep 2010 4:20 pm
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| Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous)
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Great Draco and Harry moments. Love the interaction between the three kids and laughed at the shaving scene.
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