I really like how knowing Severus is.
| Title: An Abused Tale
| 27 Sep 2016 1:52 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Excellent scene and characterisation thank you
Short, but very good. I like how Draco is Harry's friend, and that Snape is so matter of fact in this.
| Title: An Abused Tale
| 26 Oct 2013 3:23 am
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| Reviewer: Syrine (Anonymous)
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Good Story. No one denies you have skill.
You don't have an ending to this though, Ebbtide. This, just like Severus Draconis Potter, is something you lack.
You want to supply the readers with a satisfying resolution if you really want a 10 for a rating.
YAY! what a good start! I can't wait for more!! :)
Author's Response: I'm glad that you enjoyed it. :). Thank you, for the review. :)
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