Awesome chapter, update soon :)
I'm in love...with your story of course. :)
uhh, lots of excitement! Very nice!
But o.O. that means trouble?!
Hopefully Severus will be reasonable but won't forget that Harry clearly ignored the rules there and formed them to his bidding!
And besides that, put his and Tommy's life in danger!
Can't wait for an update!
Author's Response: Yes they would be in big trouble but I think the scare of what happen would have a big impact. Thanks a lot for reviewing.
| Title: Chapter 5: Greatest Wizard in the World
| 23 Oct 2010 8:37 pm
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Awwww! Awesome! But yes, Harry is going to be in sooo much trouble! And Tom too! Eek! loved the ball, and the canon original characters are very interesting. I wonder if Lord Potter will say anything? Maybe he will say something after his wife miscarries, like wanting Harry. Or maybe Snape will help them keep their children from dying...
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot, yes they would be in trouble but they would also know they have family who love them.
| Title: Chapter 3: Saving One Saves All
| 01 Oct 2010 9:28 pm
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Wow. Yes! :) Hehe, and now Harry can start over again, with a Father who cares and a little brother! Great! I loved how Harry showed up as his 14 year old self, and how Snape got him to take the "medicine."
Love the plot, and good job on the writing and development! I can't wait to see how all of their characters unfold. And who will Snape find to play Mother? Great job! thanks for writing this!
Author's Response: Thanks I am glad you are enjoying it. I think Sev is a great father figure
WooHoo - Harry is young again and has another chance.
Looking forward to more
Author's Response: Yes I think that makes it interesting so he would be brother to Tom
| Title: Chapter 3: Saving One Saves All
| 01 Oct 2010 3:55 pm
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| Reviewer: Wolverine (Anonymous)
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I loved this chapter! I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks a lot
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