| Title: Chapter 17
| 01 Sep 2014 12:20 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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please write more! Brilliant!
Absolutely brilliant story! I have never been so happy to find a story as when I happened across this one. Your character development is great, include Snapes ooc humor but at the same time so unbelievably believable. I can honestly say that I am very interested to see what will happen next! Keep up with the great writing, you have a gift.
What a great story! I enjoyed reading every single chapter (straight through might I add) and it's a very original story. Harry and Snape as well as the rest of the characters seem unique too as if no other writer has played with them quite the way you do. I'm glad we finally solved that trunk problem. Quite interesting it was to find out it was the elves all along. Like I said, I really want to continue reading this story and I look forward to the next chapter.
Love your story! It is incredibly creative...unique! Have not read anything like this on here yet!
I love this story! It is so realistic! (well, not the vampires... For obvious reasons... But who am I to say there are no vampires? Lol). Every aspect of Harry's life is realistic... From his eating issues and being gay to being able to finally find someone to rely on in Severus. I cannot wait until you continue this story. Especially interaction between Sev and Harry...I am kinda curious as to what Sev will say to Harry when or if he sees the illustrated books he bought in the porn store lol. Anyways, again, FANTASTIC job! You definitely left me wanting more! =)
Ok I admit was totally confused in the begining of the story..but I like it
Its different and its sweet...please continue, and I hope your muse comes back? lol ehh I'm fighting with my muse too if it helps lol
This is really really really good.
More?
Please?
I really like your story, very enjoynable :)
| Title: Chapter 16
| 04 Jun 2011 6:28 pm
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| Reviewer: LaPapillonne (Anonymous)
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I love this story. It's a little disjointed (I feel like it is missing some scenes), but I love the plot arc. Can't wait to see how Harry will react when he 'meets' Ron and Hermione, especially to see how much he has changed.
Keep up the good work :]
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