| Title: Chessmen
| 16 Jan 2011 4:18 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lovely little repite from all the drama thank you
Lovely! I'm very much enjoying this!
This is truly a very well done and compelling story. It is one of the best and freshest new fan fictions come about in quite some time. You keep your characters…well…in character while establishing a very believable relationship between them. You’re writing and dialogue is a joy to read and your story line is imaginative. Well done, keep up the good work and I look forward to more of your marvelous story.
Missyann
The relationship between Snape and Harry continues to develop in an easily believable way.
lol cute I love that idea! I look forward to the following chapters.
Curiouser and curiouser....I really should change my name to Alice :P. Kudos.
| Title: The Elephant in the Room
| 14 Jan 2011 3:42 am
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| Reviewer: Claris (Anonymous)
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Just discovered this story. Brilliant. The descriptions of occlumency are so good and I like how you've ended this chapter.
If you want to make it more authentic, change the name of the newspaper at the beginning of the story from Surrey Sun to Surrey Advertiser. Locals call it the Surrey Ad for short. That's the paper the Dursleys would read.
| Title: The Elephant in the Room
| 13 Jan 2011 12:43 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lovely lot of emotion without getting too slushy thank you for an excellent story it gets better and better
I've just stumbled across this one and don't know how I managed to miss it before.
This is a really interesting mentor Snape fiction and I like how you have portrayed both of the main characters. Severus is capable and trying his best, which Harry can see and so it's not surprising that he starts trusting Snape.
Anyway, really enjoying it, looking forward to the next instalment!
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