I really love your writing style. I love how in depth you go into your character's feelings.It is very interesting Snape's approach to Occlumency. He is much more gentle this time.
Wonderful chapter. I love all of the water imagery that you use in this as well as the connection between the womb and trust that you used in this chapter. You write beautifully.
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