wow, this is very well thought out. good job. :D
LOVE the last little interaction! Fantastic chapter!
This is incredibly good. Amazing! I love it! The writing is very good, the pace perfect. I can't wait to see what happens with Snape!
This chapter felt peaceful. I really enjoyed the legilimens session and the discussion afterwards. I am very much looking forward to the next chapter.
| Title: Hats, Crackers and Presents
| 28 Dec 2010 2:36 pm
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| Reviewer: rosina (Signed)
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Loved the hats, the crackers, the presents...
| Title: First Moment of Impact
| 28 Dec 2010 2:11 pm
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| Reviewer: rosina (Signed)
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Characterisation seems good - I think I'm going to enjoy this.
| Title: The Dream
| 28 Dec 2010 2:08 pm
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| Reviewer: harryphila (Anonymous)
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Love the story and absolutely love the update rate!!!! Why would Snape try it that way? Will he explain to Harry ? Will the ocean be successful? Will they finally talk?
Waiting for the update!!!
This story is so beautifully written SS. I could just imagine the breeze ruffling my hair, and the tangy smell of salt from the ocean, wafting through the air, and the mournful cry of seagulls wrenching the air. Ooops, so sorry. Got caught up in the flow of this beautiful story.
I'm anxious to see how Snape and Harry's relationship devleops into trust.
Great job.
I'm very intrigued by this story, and where you're going with it. Welcome to P&S.
I'm so glad that Harry was able to put aside his anger towards Snape about Sirius' death, and open up to him about how he got the scars from Umbridge.
Great chappie. I can't wait for the next one.
Oh my. It was very dramatic and serious until I got to the bit about cartwheels. What an image! :D
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