This is good and I like it. It's a bit negative but then it gets better.
Peace!
CheyRain
I loved the 'tied the other end to a door' part. Made me laugh.
Now that was clever! I enjoyed the rant. This tin thing is SO like Albus, what an idiot. It's well written, too.
PS Yes, my boy is okay now, thank you for asking :)
Author's Response: You're welcome, and I'm so glad he's ok!
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| 27 Mar 2011 6:18 pm
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| Reviewer: Sabrina Puckett (Anonymous)
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I cannot disagree with your self-assesment.
| Title: Just a Pawn
| 10 Jan 2011 5:09 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lovely bit of nothing if youmust call it that
very good I likke how you wrote it.
very good I likke how you wrote it.
I liked it! Angsty and sweet all in one!
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