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Title: Chapter 20 06 Feb 2011 8:16 pm
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    This is such a wonderful story! I love it that Tim has Severus' wand and that they will be able to cure him.

    You have an excellent handle on characterization and I truly love the way you bring us into the chapters in media res and still manage to make sure that the reader knows everything they need to know to carry on with the tale.

    Bravo!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you.  I'm very impatient--I don't like to spend a lot of time in setting up scenes.  

    I love these characters.

     

     

Title: Chapter 19 06 Feb 2011 8:09 pm
Reviewer: chrmisha (Signed) [Report This]
    I love Snape. Great writing!
Title: Chapter 18 06 Feb 2011 6:27 pm
Reviewer: chrmisha (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved this sentence: "Like wizard, like wand." Great Chapter!

    Author's Response: That's gotta be a Wizard proverb or something.
Title: Chapter 17 06 Feb 2011 1:48 pm
Reviewer: Inu Chan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I busted right out laughing at the last line: the Vernon and Petunia Dursley scholarship for Wizarding Youth. LOLOLOLOL!

    Please write more soon.

    Author's Response: Hee.  Dudley has a wicked, dry sense of humor.
Title: Chapter 17 06 Feb 2011 1:11 pm
Reviewer: chrmisha (Signed) [Report This]
    Liked everything up until the last line. Scholarship names are an honor and Vernon and Petunia stole that money meant for Harry. I'd rather it be the "Harry and Dudley scholarship." Well, we'll see in the next chapter :-)

    Author's Response:

    Don't worry, that's just Dudley's rather deadpan humor--a common trait to social workers.  Harry doesn't want it named after him, so it'll be "The Barton Scholarship"--Dudley uses Phillip's last name.

     

Title: Chapter 16 06 Feb 2011 1:03 pm
Reviewer: chrmisha (Signed) [Report This]
    Love the funeral colors, such a neat idea!

    Author's Response: I borrowed the idea from Victorian funeral customs, but the colors chosen are my own.
Title: Chapter 15 06 Feb 2011 12:56 pm
Reviewer: chrmisha (Signed) [Report This]
    So touching... I love Molly making an appearance and hopefully earning some trust in Tim's eyes.
Title: Chapter 14 06 Feb 2011 12:47 pm
Reviewer: chrmisha (Signed) [Report This]
    Oooh, sooo good! Here's something I never thought of before: "I've thought about the damned prophecy over the years, too. I sometimes wonder if 'Mark him as his equal' meant I was marked for the kind of childhood." Interesting thought! And I loved this line too: "I'm finding things that are fascinating, useful, amazingly insightful and not at all what I'm looking for." Great job!
Title: Chapter 13 06 Feb 2011 12:39 pm
Reviewer: chrmisha (Signed) [Report This]
    This is amazingly well written and I'm really loving it! I especially love: "It left him numb, clumsy, unsure of himself; occasionally it made him feel unreal, so he rereestablished his presence in his body by causing himself pain. Something he could feel." I have a child like that, poor kid.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, Tim's symptoms are similiar to problems my son has had, as well as problems I myself have had.

    Sort of a severe case of fibromyalgia accompanied with a disorder in sensory integration.   

    I figure "Crucio" is Unforgivable for a reason.

     Thanks for reading

     

Title: Chapter 12 06 Feb 2011 12:31 pm
Reviewer: chrmisha (Signed) [Report This]
    Phenomenally well written chapter. Great job!

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