| Title: Chapter 8
| 02 Feb 2011 10:25 pm
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| Reviewer: wynnleaf (Anonymous)
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Wow, excellent chapter - well, all the last three chapters. I especially like the way this chapter shows us some of Snape at Hogwarts during DH and the kind of thing he would surely have had to do, with ruses to protect students while deceiving the Carrows.
| Title: Chapter 5
| 01 Feb 2011 9:22 pm
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| Reviewer: Lizzete (Anonymous)
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Absolutely loved your story!!
Please, update soon!!
Ooh, I was worried when Tim disappeared. I thought his evil-father wizard stole him. Good he was only on the roof! Can't wait to read more!
Poor Tim! It's a good thing he has Harry, who can - sort of - understand what he went through.
I really like where you're going with this and the way you're including so many of the characters into the story, in a way that makes complete sense. Please update soon!
Another great chapter. I love the character of Mr. Clark; it's good to know that Tim had *some* adults in his life that he could trust. Nice touch with having him end up on the roof like Harry when he was young.
So, Tim likes lilies and hates snakes... very interesting :)!
As for Parseltongue, I agree that it shouldn't just disappear after Voldemort's death (the scar didn't, either!). It's actually a pretty useful skill to have, all prejudices aside.
Crucio?! You are "Crucio"ing me with all the suspense. I'm dying to know what Snape and Tim had to make Snape so insistent for Harry to care for Tim. And the Crucio. Oh poor Tim. Fabulous work as always, but hurry and update!! Lol.
| Title: Chapter 3
| 31 Jan 2011 10:09 pm
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| Reviewer: Chelle (Anonymous)
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Curious and curiouser...Dream Snape is extremely interesting and keeps taunting us with tidbits with his continued interest in Tim. Or is this a red herring and Tim has nothing to do with the relationship (though dysfunctional since he's dead)with Harry.
I'm totally loving this story! Thanks for updating so frequently! Great job!
I'm very much enjoying this, it's a bit of a fresh take. Hope you continue on.
I'm so sure you wrote this to plague me. What's the connection between Tim and Snape? I mean, they have to HAVE some sort of connection seeing as how Tim sounded so much like Snape!!! On the other hand, Dudley is so...friendly. It's a bit weird, imagining Dudley as someone so.. genial. I can't help but notice how Tim is a bit similar to Harry (and probably Snape) when he's (they're) young. All in all, excellent work, and update!
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