Oh. My. GOD. This is perfect! I mean, I'd much prefer a living Severus, but I guess beggars can't afford to choose. I like the Harry chanelling Snape part, it was wonderful! I'd once wonder about how Harry would fare as a dad, and I guess this is also how I imagined it. Great work, love the banter between the two guys. Excellent work, and update soon!
| Title: Chapter 2
| 30 Jan 2011 8:42 pm
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| Reviewer: Chelle (Anonymous)
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Wonderful beginning to a story that explores the post-Hogwarts life of some of our favorite alumni. It not only fits in with canon but is credible without stretching the imagination too far. I am curious about Snape's connection is to young Tim (I am sure you put the bezoar question in just to make us think of the Snape/Tim connection. It worked.) and would have loved to see Tim's placement into the Potter's home. Looking forwarded to the next chapter(s).
Oh, I think I have a theory about Tim... can't wait to see if I'm right!
Another very good chapter; I *like* how you write Dudley! It makes so much sense that he'd change his views on "freaks" after his parents declared him one.
Looking forward to more!
MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I know that really doesn't count as a review and it's really unhelpful, but MORE!!!!!!!! I need more. I love your Dudley and Elenor and I adore Tim! I just want to pick him up and cuddle him. I can't wait to see how you bring Snape into this more. Please continue, and update soon!
| Title: Chapter 2
| 30 Jan 2011 1:09 pm
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| Reviewer: Inu Chan (Anonymous)
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I'm liking this. I always did hope that Dudley would grow up to be not such a jerk. Most interested to see where this story will go.
| Title: Chapter 1
| 30 Jan 2011 11:08 am
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| Reviewer: hawkswench (Anonymous)
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oh man what a place to leave it. I really didn't think toad face could have had him expelled until the end as she would have to have a really good explanation on why she was kicking him out.
| Title: Chapter 1
| 30 Jan 2011 9:00 am
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| Reviewer: Nakago (Anonymous)
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I'm very grateful you placed this story here as well - I could read it thanks to that. On ff.net it's definitely harder to find anything worth reading that here. And this fanfiction surely is worth reading. You have my gratitude.
| Title: Chapter 1
| 30 Jan 2011 8:14 am
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| Reviewer: wynnleaf (Anonymous)
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Very interesting start. The dream sequence at the beginning was excellent - far more like real dreams than most fictional dreams.
This story have big potential, I'm really looking forward for more!
This story have big potential, I'm really looking forward for more!
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