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Title: The Past Remembered 28 Feb 2015 10:37 am
Reviewer: hisnhers (Signed) [Report This]
    Too cute and sweet and adorable and just wonderful.... -giggle-

    --his

    Author's Response: Oh yes, I had waaaaay too much fun with tiny Severus. Cheers! Thanks for dropping a line. :)
Title: Nox 28 Feb 2015 10:04 am
Reviewer: hisnhers (Signed) [Report This]
    opinions? you want my opinion? You're cruel. you buried that poor man alive - better than dead obviously - but ... I'm clausterphobic! lol.

    Great chapter. Had me breathing intensley with poor Severus the whole time. whew! I'm glad we're - ummm, I mean, he's, out of that coffin. lol.

    --his

    Author's Response: Oh yes, I fully admit I am cruel. Evil, even. And the worst part - I relish in causing readers emotional distress! It's my job, as a writer. I know. Terrible. But seriously - eek, claustrophobia ... wow, sorry for making this like the most horrid chapter ever for you. But I am glad you thought it was great anyway. Great to hear you're still breathing too! Cheers, Whitetail.
Title: Harry's Brother and the Great Cupboard Ambush 28 Feb 2015 9:47 am
Reviewer: hisnhers (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh boy..... Ohboyohboyohboy.... Next chapter... --his

    Author's Response: Haha, thanks for the review!
Title: Say Hello to Chaos and Anarchy 28 Feb 2015 9:29 am
Reviewer: hisnhers (Signed) [Report This]
    Very nice start. Riding furniture? lol.

    --his

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Glad you liked the furniture part. :D
Title: Shatter the World 01 Nov 2014 4:39 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Hi. I'm Dream Painter, and I am an addict. I find myself reading Whitetail's fanfiction when I should be doing other things, like sleeping or working on my own stories...

    By this point, I fear I am in danger of starting to sound redundant. I just really, really like your writing. Little Sev was absolutely darling, of course! And Dramione pleases me well, as it is one of my ships of choice.

    Well done with the tentative truce between Severus and Sirius - and that last scene with Severus and Harry just gives me so many feels, I simply cannot... Wonderfully writ!

    Author's Response: So, if you're an addict of my fics, does that make me your dealer? Haha, don't fear sounding redundant, Dream! I'm loving the reviews, especially because I haven't gotten any new reviews for my older stories in ages. Thanks so much for taking the time to tell me you are still enjoying the stories! Glad you liked the sort of truce between Severus and Sirius. Ah, and little Sev. I had way too much fun with this story. It's similar to the last, but I was just beside myself with giggling while I wrote it - so glad you had fun too! Cheers!
Title: Shatter the World 03 Aug 2014 8:03 am
Reviewer: snarry fan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Pls write anothr book pls...pls......pleeeeeeeease

    Author's Response: Surprise - there's a third one! I did write another, and I did love writing it so hopefully it is fun to read, despite being very different from DWLF and ASM. Thanks for the review!
Title: Shatter the World 28 Feb 2014 3:56 pm
Reviewer: Dontgotaclue88 (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved it! :)

    Author's Response: Haha, thanks for the feedback! Great to hear it was a hit with you! Cheers. :)
Title: Shatter the World 11 Aug 2013 1:26 am
Reviewer: me (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This story was too awesome. so awesome in fact, that i dont understan how you managed to put in words.

    Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! I am glad you enjoyed it. 
Title: Shatter the World 07 Feb 2013 8:07 pm
Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    The End? More like: The Best End! Loved the fact that Harry now sees their relationship in a bright new light. But my fave scene is the one between Sirius and Severus-- I don't think I've ever seen their mutual acknowledgement handled quite so well in any other stories. And the difference is the boggart between them; without it, a reconciliation of this degree simply wouldn't be possible. A little touch of genius on your part, Whitetail! :-)

    Author's Response: Wow, thanks so much shadowienne! I always thought that Severus and Sirius had so much in common, and that they actually could have respected each other if they just knew from the start that they came from similar situations. I am glad that you liked that. I really enjoyed writing their little subplot, so I am so happy it was enjoyed!
Title: Fears Unknown 06 Feb 2013 2:38 am
Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Underpants!!! I never would have guessed! Hahahahahaaaaaa! But sometimes it takes a child to logic things out... Love it! :-D ! // The cupboard scene caught me by surprise; I'd thought Sev would get trapped in there and have to be let out, but I never expected what he found! How terrifying for poor Sev. And what a revelation for the adult on scene-- wonder how that might develop later on... But seriously, this chapter took me from laughter to tears-- great job!

    Author's Response: I am so happy to know you liked it shadowienne! I had fun with the superhero thing. Underpants indeed ... I am also pleased you enjoyed the cupboard scene. I really have been dying to have Sirius find out Severus' boggart for a long time, especially as a child. Anyway, thanks so very much for the review! It totally made my day!

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