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Title: Shatter the World 25 Mar 2011 7:46 am
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome ending. Loved it. Do you plan to write more in the universe? Like a sequel to this story? Love it.

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review, though I don't plan to pen out another story in this universe. Perhaps a one-shot or two but nothing big. Then again, that's what I said when I finished Days We Learn From! So, unless I have another brainwave in the middle of the night, no. Keep your eyes out though, it could happen. ;)
Title: Shatter the World 25 Mar 2011 6:43 am
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you for an enjoyable story. The talk between Sirius and Snape went well and I think he was so shocked that it wasn't to drastic. Also between Harry and his "Dad" that was perfect. I hope you find inspiration to write again.

    Author's Response: Thanks a lot for reviewing! I'm happy you enjoyed Harry's Dad moment. As for inspiration to write again: an Idea hit me over the head a couple days ago for something new!
Title: Shatter the World 25 Mar 2011 4:24 am
Reviewer: Sita Z (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no, the last chapter! Apart from it being the final one, though, I really loved it. Sirius has finally grown up, it seems - I'm glad, because it would have been really hard on Harry if his dad and his dogfather, er, godfather, didn't get along.
    Thanks so much for writing and posting this, Whitetail! You're a great storyteller, and I enjoyed each and every chapter. I'm hoping to see more from you soon!
    Thanks again,
    Sita

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review, and all the ones you contributed! I'm glad you were happy with Sirius growing up a little. Thanks for all the encouragement, and you will be seeing another story from me fairly soon. It will probably take a month at the longest to get the first chapter up, as I want to plan it out a bit first. I'm very excited about my idea, and have decided to retreat from my bad habit of planning as I write ... Anyways, thanks!
Title: This is Home 22 Mar 2011 8:44 am
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh I don't like that there is only one more chapter. I was hoping for a sequel as I really like the way you portray the characters.

    Author's Response: Well, technically this *is* the sequel! You probably mean a third instalment of the series! Glad you're enjoying it, and thank you for sharing!
Title: This is Home 22 Mar 2011 6:51 am
Reviewer: Sita Z (Signed) [Report This]
    Love how you described Sev's transition from kid to adult, and his accompanying feelings and confusion. I'm glad he found another home after so many years.
    I also like your Dumbledore; Dumbledore's often portrayed as cold and manipulating in fanfic, but personally I think there's so much more to his character. I love how your story shows this!
    The last chapter - no! But I am looking forward to Sirius making an appearance :).
    Post soon please!
    Sita

    Author's Response: I'm gald you liked Severus' confusion. I wanted to throw a little of that in there, as we missed out on what it was like to make that transition for the person being re-aged in DWLF, as it's from Sev's perspective. Thanks for the feedback on Dumbledore! I was sort of wondering how I did him as a character, so this makes me feel really cheery! Thanks for the review!
Title: This is Home 22 Mar 2011 6:45 am
Reviewer: Anna (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Well done. It is not disjointed. It is rather well written and shows a reconciliation for Sev with his past and present self.

    Author's Response: Glad you think so! I wasn't sure how well it flowed, and I'm relieved to know you don't think so! Thank you.
Title: This is Home 22 Mar 2011 2:08 am
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    yay. Love it :D

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! ;)
Title: See You on the Other Side 20 Mar 2011 6:58 pm
Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed) [Report This]
    I almost hate to see him have to grow up again, really. This summer has been so good for him, learning to trust people, and coming to understand that just because people yell and shout it doesn't mean that they are mean, just upset. My favorite bit? Gosh, ALL of it! :) I'm really looking forward to the next chapter and I wish you well with your tests and assignments.

    Author's Response: I'm glad you've enjoyed the story so far, and thanks for the well wishes regarding all my work! I appreciate the review!
Title: See You on the Other Side 20 Mar 2011 5:39 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm so pleased you gave little Sev one more happy day (and a snitch victory), and us another warm,sun-on-your-back feeling chapter.

    Author's Response: Sun-on-you-back feeling, eh? That sure is a nifty way of putting it! Thanks for sharing. ;)
Title: See You on the Other Side 18 Mar 2011 3:06 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    It is sad to see Sev's last day but I can't wait to see big Sev's reaction to all the things he did. I especially look forward to Harry and Severus reuniting as I think he missed him as the adult although he enjoyed him being small.

    Author's Response: Severus is going to be positively mortified isn't he? Well, thank you so much for the review!

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