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Reviews For A Summer's Misadventures
I really liked the boggart and Sirius' intervention; I'd love to see more interaction between him and Sev. Great chapter, thanks for writing! Author's Response: Yeah, poor Severus eh? Sirius will show up again, but perhaps not really soon. Anyway, thank you for the review!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Thanks a lot for the review!
Author's Response: I'm glad too. I bet it would be pretty crazy for Sirius to find something like that out about his enemy! Thanks for the review!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot for the review. I must say, Severus is going to be mighty grumpy when he remembers all the things he's said!
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback!
I really like your Draco, he's funny and just a nice guy with some insecurities. I'll admit that Ron's not my favorite character (in canon *and* fanfic), but I liked how you wrote his reaction - it's characteristic of him that he wouldn't accept Draco right away, but that he'd give in once he could see things from Draco's point of view. I'm not too fond of the evil!Ron often found in fanfic, so I thought your characterization was really well done. Please post soon! Sita Author's Response: Thanks a lot for the long review! I'm glad you liked Sev getting stuck in a tree and his imagination. It's rediculously fun to write about his little trips into his imagination. Thanks for the feedback on the argument, I was hoping someone would share their thoughts on it. Thanks so much!
I loved his bonding moment with Draco during the lightning storm. Maybe next time Sev plays dragons and wizards Draco gets to participate *hinthint* :)? Great chapter, looking forward to the next one! Author's Response: Glad you liked it and thanks a lot for the lengthy review! And don't worry, Sev and Draco will have plenty more time to have fun, though not necessarily during dragons and wizards ...
Author's Response: Thanks for sharing your thoughts!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, glad you liked it!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, glad you liked it! I'm glad they escaped too ... |
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