| Title: Grasping at Straws
| 03 Feb 2011 12:16 pm
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| Reviewer: christy (Anonymous)
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WOW I started reading this last night and i am totally hooked!!! Cant wait to see what happens next!!! That was a major clift hanger!!!
its really good
i love your story
cant wait for the next chapetr please update soon :D
| Title: Isolated
| 03 Feb 2011 11:31 am
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| Reviewer: Inu Chan (Anonymous)
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Why is Ron being such a (male genitals)? Though, even in canon this would not be so out of character for him. I am glad to see that Lucius is not as nasty as he could have been, though someone like him would have a keen sense of reciprocal obligations. I would agree with Harry that he probably had a "come to Jesus" with Draco out of earshot, and good thing too. I want to find out why Snape is being so awful too. Write more soon.
Oh this chapter brought tears to my eyes!
Please update soon I can not wait!!!!!
- Ash
Uh oh. Snape is such a knot-head. Great beginning. Great emotions in this one. Can't wait for more.
| Title: Isolated
| 03 Feb 2011 9:13 am
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| Reviewer: fictionfan (Anonymous)
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Good story, although Ron's defection seems a bit abrupt and I would have bet Molly and Arthur would have asked Harry to spend time with them regardless of Harry's Partentage. I would have also bet they would have had a word or two for our Potion's master.
Malfoy's change of attitude towards Harry makes sense, a feeling of debt towards SS for taking care of Draco.
Keep writing
Hey, really cool up to now.
I can actually really see this happening!
Please update soon, I am waiting eagerly :)
| Title: Isolated
| 03 Feb 2011 5:53 am
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| Reviewer: Marlie (Anonymous)
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Ron is such a jerk! Although I can see him acting like that. Good story so far.
There's a lot of unresolved tension right now, and I'm looking forward to finding out how you're going to resolve it.
Great work so far, I look forward to more!
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