| Title: Ch 1 - Heroic Consequences
| 20 Feb 2011 1:56 pm
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| Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
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Very interesting and original premise; I really liked how you portrayed the tension before and confusion during the battle and how you depicted Harry's awakening and slow realisation of his injuries. I'm looking forward to the next installment.
| Title: Ch 1 - Heroic Consequences
| 20 Feb 2011 1:56 pm
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| Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
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Very interesting and original premise; I really liked how you portrayed the tension before and confusion during the battle and how you depicted Harry's awakening and slow realisation of his injuries. I'm looking forward to the next installment.
I love all of your fics, especially Definition, but this... I don't know, its just strange. I hoped that you would write Harry is Severus's brother, but as abusive Tobias's son. And here, both of them have 25 years... I don't know... I think I don't like such great, unnatural changes in theirs life, and in addiction Sev lost many years?
But of course besides this idea you are great writer, so I'm waiting for next chapter.
OMG. This is going to be pretty epic! I've never seen this done before and it sounds interesting. I love your stories and will definitely be following this one! :-)
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