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Reviews For Between the Lines
Title: Agony of the Written Word 07 Mar 2011 9:19 pm
Reviewer: JolisGSD (Signed) [Report This]
    How absolutely horrible! (and I mean this in a good way). Umbridge comes across, of course, as a really evil toad. Harry's reason for not "telling" is believable. Well written.

    I look forward to more.
Title: Agony of the Written Word 07 Mar 2011 9:00 pm
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    ARGH! Don't leave us here, please! Damn that toad, and damn Snape for his cruelty. That man had better get some sense knocked into him soon, or I'll do it for him! Kudos on a well written, and frankly over-discriptive chapter...blech. I did like it, even with the disgusting infection bit.
Title: Agony of the Written Word 07 Mar 2011 8:00 pm
Reviewer: Chelle (Anonymous) [Report This]
    "Harry, you stupid, stupid boy. Tell someone!" is what I wanted to yell while I was reading your story. This is testimony to how much it affected me. Well written chapter. I'm looking forward to the next chapter because I know my favorite greasy git will save Harry before the quill poisons his whole system. right?
Title: Agony of the Written Word 07 Mar 2011 2:55 pm
Reviewer: frodolove12 (Signed) [Report This]
    *Shudders* How darkly fantastic! Very intriguing first chapter. Poor Harry :'( I really hope Snape finds out soon! Your writing is fantastic, keep up the good work. Update soon? :D
Title: Agony of the Written Word 07 Mar 2011 12:40 pm
Reviewer: starangel2106 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh wow. This seems interesting. I can't wait for more.
Title: Agony of the Written Word 07 Mar 2011 12:22 pm
Reviewer: Sleeping Soundly (Signed) [Report This]
    Love this! Umbridge is perfectly sadistic and I can't wait for a sympathetic Snape to storm in and save the day! :) xx
Title: Agony of the Written Word 07 Mar 2011 10:07 am
Reviewer: lexie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is so great! The best fanfiction I've read in awhile! You're an excellent writer, I love your wording and descriptions! The storyline is so good and very believable. Please update soon!
Title: Agony of the Written Word 07 Mar 2011 8:16 am
Reviewer: chrmisha (Signed) [Report This]
    OK, so what I want to see is Snape finding Harry after his detention as he's walking back to Gryffindor tower and Snape finding out what's wrong and taking him to the hospital wing. Great start!
Title: Agony of the Written Word 07 Mar 2011 7:15 am
Reviewer: Shadow (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Umbridge is a BITCH! And Snape is a git. Sorry, but I must write it down.
    Anyway... It is a superb start of a new story. And I hope you update soon, because I'm looking forward the next chapter! =o)
Title: Agony of the Written Word 07 Mar 2011 6:40 am
Reviewer: florence (Signed) [Report This]
    i'm getting shivers reading this! fabulous beginning, very impatient to find out what happens next... :)

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