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Reviews For Between the Lines
Title: Agony of the Written Word 07 Mar 2011 6:27 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    It is quite possible that you have succeeded in making me hate Umbridge more than I already do - which is really saying something, as I would merrily bash her head into paste with those damn proclamations of hers.

    An excellent start, truly. I can't wait for the next chapter. ^^

    ... No, seriously. Where is it?
Title: Agony of the Written Word 07 Mar 2011 4:42 am
Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh Poor Harry!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Update soon please.
Title: Agony of the Written Word 07 Mar 2011 2:50 am
Reviewer: fanficaholic (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great start! Can't wait for more!
Title: Agony of the Written Word 07 Mar 2011 2:48 am
Reviewer: Arbitrary Doom (Signed) [Report This]
    ..........kinda dark, but I like it thus far....Snape to the rescue I hope...great job and please continue
Title: Agony of the Written Word 07 Mar 2011 12:58 am
Reviewer: wandlorean (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Ooh, this is wonderful! Snape is such a nasty prick and Umbridge is one very sick individual. I love it. You get bonus points for having Ron say 'cor' as well.
Title: Agony of the Written Word 07 Mar 2011 12:53 am
Reviewer: Mellow Moon (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful start. It's really well written and your Umbridge is sickeningly sinister and vile. Can't wait to read the reactions to whats been happening in those detentions and how sick Harry has become.
Title: Agony of the Written Word 07 Mar 2011 12:20 am
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh. My. God. How horrible. Not the story, of course. The story is wonderful. Umbridge though... how creepy.

    Your writing is great, very canon.

    When I got to the end, desperate to see what happens next, I knew I was hooked. Very compelling story you've got here.

    Great job! I can't wait for more!
Title: Agony of the Written Word 06 Mar 2011 11:58 pm
Reviewer: RosieLB (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, please update soon. The pain! The agony!

    In all seriousness - excellent start. Poor Harry! I hope that Umbridge meets a delightfully painful end.
Title: Agony of the Written Word 06 Mar 2011 11:49 pm
Reviewer: Moon_Willow (Signed) [Report This]
    OMG. I really do hope Snape will come cursting through that door and hexing Umbridge senseless! Please, make Severus come in... I can't bear to see Harry in pain already. It's like he almost think he deserved it. Update soon!
Title: Agony of the Written Word 06 Mar 2011 11:26 pm
Reviewer: mortedevivre (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow. Words escape me. This is extremely well written. The characters fit the mood of the story and I really like how you are portraying them.

    I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep on writing.

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