| Title: Chapter 34
| 04 Mar 2013 5:50 pm
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| Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous)
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The Odd Room--- oh boy! I get the feeling I'm going to like it! :-D
| Title: Chapter 28
| 25 Feb 2013 12:44 am
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Wow! Powerfully dramatic! The reality was even worse then the nightmare itself!
| Title: Chapter 26
| 25 Feb 2013 12:19 am
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| Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous)
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"Life after a war was picking up the pieces, dealing with years of fallout..." How very, very true.
Just wanted to tell you that I'm really enjoying your story. I have just been too engrossed in it to leave a review after each chapter, but It's been awhile since I've been able to lose myself so deeply in a nice long story!
Great job.
Author's Response: You're very welcome, Pandora! I'm always pleased knowing that my storytelling is entertaining. :)
| Title: Chapter 23
| 24 Feb 2013 5:41 pm
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| Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous)
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EXCELLENT use of the forbidden corridor! I think I was holding my breath throughout the second half of this chapter! Now, I wonder how (or IF) they'll be able to utilize it...
| Title: Chapter 22
| 24 Feb 2013 2:21 pm
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| Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous)
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Hee! While looking up ley lines yesterday, I came across an article about the Bermuda Triangle! This is getting ever more interesting!
| Title: Chapter 20
| 24 Feb 2013 3:27 am
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Snape as their guardian-- egad! Not to mention, they've gone wandering off again... even if they're sticking together as Snape had ordered them to. Don't want to see "uncle's" face when they get back!
| Title: Chapter 12
| 23 Feb 2013 3:11 pm
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| Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous)
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Many thanks for your response on Chap 12-- that was not a typo in my comment; I honestly thought you'd written about "key" lines, and after reading your response, I came back to take another look at this chapter, and it DID say "ley lines" instead. I feel like an idiot for misreading! (And I had actually googled "key lines" to see if they were real-- but the results were not enlightening! Now I'll have something new to google!) :-P ;-D
Author's Response: You're not an idiot -- just a fast reader. :)
| Title: Chapter 16
| 23 Feb 2013 2:56 pm
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Dumbledore-- ha! Terrific! And I do like Professor Darlyle; it would be interesting to see his mature mind turning over new ideas, maybe helping the travellers create their wormhole back to the present.
| Title: Chapter 12
| 20 Feb 2013 7:34 pm
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| Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous)
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I don't know what key lines are, but I'll look forward to learning, along with Snape!
Author's Response: Ley Lines. Google them. They're real and terribly fascinating.
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