| Title: Chapter 11
| 20 Feb 2013 5:10 pm
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| Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous)
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So, Draco and Harry might begin to relate to each other, in this time, at least. But could it last...
| Title: Chapter 10
| 20 Feb 2013 4:56 pm
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| Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous)
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Once again, fascinating background, but to raise the question of whether Voldemort could summon Snape when they are centuries apart... Hmm... And if it were possible, could Snape use his Dark Mark to return himself and the students through Time? And if he could, WOULD he risk exposing the students to Lord V, if that might prove the only way to return to their present? Of course, if they can't get back, Tom Riddle will be born in about 30 years... How would offing him as a baby change the future? (Sorry-- couldn't resist! But the mark of a good writer is to get the readers wondering about potential possibilities, then leaving them dangling as they watch the story play out! Hee!)
| Title: Chapter 9
| 20 Feb 2013 10:32 am
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| Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous)
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Food in the library! Madam Pince would have a stroke! But the array of antics proved interesting, and it'll be interesting to see what Harry learns from the red-lined book-- if he doesn't get red-lined himself first!
| Title: Chapter 6
| 16 Feb 2013 4:46 pm
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| Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous)
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Fabulous background, drawing together characters whom we've only known by repute or portraits, weaving your own story through the existing fabric!
| Title: Chapter 3
| 16 Feb 2013 3:41 am
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| Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous)
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Great background info, but I especially liked the surprise appearance of a familiar character at the end! ;-)
| Title: Chapter 2
| 16 Feb 2013 3:06 am
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Love the harvesting scene-- lots of good descriptive detail, and I do know what grandmothers' perfume can smell like! Great comparison!
| Title: Chapter 1
| 16 Feb 2013 2:47 am
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| Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous)
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Very intriguing beginning! I'll look forward to seeing the rest of your story unfold.
This is going to take me a while..but I look forward to this challenge..of this epicness of a story lol
Author's Response: Take your time :). Try not to stay up late reading.
Absolutely loved this chapter! I was expecting the Room of Requirement, but this was so much better! I wonder who/what Snape would encounter in such a room? I am enjoying the story thus far, and it has surpassed my expectations!
The closer I got to finishing this story, the more sad I became. I loved this story so much. This is absolutely one of the best fanfics i've every read, and not only because you managed to tell a tale about time travel that was well written, but because everything in your story connected well and made sense.
I love the way you did not just go through a year of Hogwarts, and that is it. You went through two years (was it two?) complete with Summers and trips abroad and everything.You give your readers a lot to look forward to until the very end.
I love the name "Eowyn" by the way. I may use her name and Elydree's name for my daughters. Who knows, may name my son Severus. lol
I love love loveeeee Lyrica! God i'm so jealous of Harry, Draco, Elly, Eowyn, Gwenny and prankster (I forgot her name). I wish for the life these kids have in your story. Everything ended to beautifully and happy. I will be reading this story over and over again lol. I just love it!!!!
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